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for Claiming Hermione

by ilke

schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*poke poke poke* Are you alright? Just wanted to make sure. ^.^ XXOO
person Anon
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLEAAAAAAAAAAAASEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Where did you go? It's been so long since you updated! I'm going through withdrawals here. Lol. Seriously, this is fantastic. I continue to be amazed at how well you portray Draco. He stays in character, and it makes me laugh to see how he struggles with Hermione. Laughing isn't very kind, but it's my reaction. I hope that you add more soon. :) Thank you so much for this awesome story!
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15

Ahhhg! You
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14

Oooo so Ginny suspects! LOL
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person Dadella
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh noes!! it's been so long since an update (comparatively speaking, of course)I'm glad my first thought is not 'UPDATE DAMMIT', but instead a worry over your health and safety *feels better about self*

seriously though, I hope everything's okay...
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OK, great chappie. I see what you mean about Hermione now. I love the meaning behind the snitch - seekers go after what they want and don't let anything stand in their way...did Hermione mean the Aurorship or their relationship?? Hmmm...I wonder. The steamy stairway scene at the end...WOW!! It really works. Can't wait for the next update.
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13

Yay I am back! Sorry Ilke, I was scrambling to get my next chapter up and that always sucks up all my time. I can now read in leisure though, until this weekend when I try to write again.

As always I love how you set the scene. I can smell the rain and see the cloud covered sky. The mud on the windows was such a lovely visual touch. Every time I read this story I want to study your writing so I can learn more. :D

I loved Draco and Hermione
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn. I had a dream the new chapter was up, so I thought I's check......*sigh* LOL. XXOO
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11

Hahaha, yes it