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for Claiming Hermione

by ilke

schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved the title of this chapter!! I also enjoy the push and pull of their relationship immensely! The fact that he is tied in so many knots about the mix of his desires is fascinating, intriguing and very well done. Good on ya'! The sexual tension between these two is....yum and sigh. And, I find it hysterical that chose to have Dumbledore ignore it completely and get Draco (almost) focussed on something else, when you just know he knows. lol

The hallway...hhhooootttttttt!

Thank you for updating and please do so again soon, okay? :-) HG4eva
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing. I've been looking for your update. Almost got caught!!! Super hot. Hopefully she quites running from him. Hermione can enjoy having amazing sex with Draco without loving him for now. She shouldn't deny herself. Well I hope you update soon. I can't wait!
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So, I downloaded the song that Breenieweenie set in the trailer, and it really fits. I love how you reduce them both to essentially animal states. I love it. I can't wait to see what happens next. I love how you can articulate the want, the fire between them, and then the eventual burning. Fabulous chapter!!
person crescentmoon
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOSH. That was amazing. Please update again soon.
person crescentmoon
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOSH. That was amazing. Please update again soon.
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 20


Ooo yes, the room would be spinning for me too if Malfoy kissed me like he did Hermione. Light as a feather and stiff as a board! LOL

This game they play is so funny. Neither of them wants to give the other the upper hand. Yet someone will have to, if they are to come together.

I had to laugh that Hermione didn
schedule October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 19


Oh my, what a kiss! LOL *swoon*

Anyway, this was another lovely chapter. I love the idea of Draco out in the cold, flying on his broom over the snow, looking in through the windows. I imagine his face red and his nose dripping as he wraps his green scarf over his face. It
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 18

Yep, it
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17

Woohoo! What an exciting chapter! Blaise was so angry and dangerous. He
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 16

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