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for Claiming Hermione

by ilke

schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 22

I truly think you capture the most beautiful ambience in the world! I want to step into your world with the castle, the snow and the faerie lights. Draco asking Hermione to dance makes me think of Cinderella. It is so wonderfully romantic I have stardust in my eyes. You are wonderfully talented Ilke!

Even the ride in the carriage was lovely, and that walk up the stairs. I can imagine their breath making vapor trails, the gray sky growing darker in the horizon and the sugar snow sparkling over the courtyard. It really is like a faerie tale. I can
person Melanie
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow another great chapter. Please keep on going and update soon.
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok...so I am sorry that I have not reviewed before now, as I have been following the story. I want you to know that you write one hell of a cliff hanger! And the scene in the last chapter when they almost got caught in the hallway? Fantastic! Please, try to review more often (but I totally understand if you can't - I am hardly one to complain about that!)
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dude i hate you sooo much. ok i lied, i lovee you and this fic! more please!!!
person staycie
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
beautiful, just beautiful! As usual your story is AMAZING!!!! I cannot wait until the next chapter!
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy Fuck.

That was hot.
person janl
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Daaangg. Just....dang. That was very, VERY HOT!!

Good job!
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH. MY. BLOODY. GOD. WOMAN.

THAT WAS FUCKING HOT.
person gabbynatty1234
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was a freaking awesome chapter! Talk about four play. And yes i have missed you work very much! i didn't even know what to do with myself when it wasn't up man oh man i cannot wait for the next chapter i could picture it all so well in my head this was freaking hot, i think this and the mirror sex scene are my absolute fav! well i take that back give me more time to think about it. There are so many awesome sex or sex intense scenes that i just don't know witch are the top 5 but this has to be one of them! oh man finally sweet release! ahahahahahah this was great, your great! And i can't wait to see the art work im hoping for the firefly kissing scene the awesome mirror scene and obviously this one! Man i hope there all there!
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 21


I just love the way you write Draco. It