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for Claiming Hermione

by ilke

person update asap
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is excellently written, well plotted, beautifully paced, the characters are strong and hold their own and dear god, draco is sexy as hell. wouldn't mind some more D/s hunting scenes :)
person sugypunk
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapters! I had to read about three to catch back up, but it was worth it! I'm anxious to see how their relationship pans out from here! Good luck with the wisdom teeth... I've had that surgery, and you feel a whole lot better after they are out. :-) Good luck! Update when you can!
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry about your tooth, but I was so happy to see the new chapter! I was without electricity due to a snowstorm and the kids had been driving me up the wall all day. Once the power came back on I finally sat down and BINGO! New chapter is up and waiting for me! It really made my day.

I so easily get wrapped back up in this story. I love the angst going on between the two of them right now. Both of them trying to wrap their heads around what is happening and what they're feeling. I especially love the fact that he just snuggled up to her and fell asleep at the end. That gives off such a feeling of closeness and comfort. *dreamy sigh* So romantic. =)

Good luck with having your tooth removed. That sucks.
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww i love the ending of this chapter =] cant as usual stoked to read the next chapter
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So I'm so sorry about your wisdom teeth problem - I still have mine too, but I had room for them so they thought it best not to remove them unless it was necessary. Also, I would have reviewed earlier but I've been moving for the last few weeks into my new house so yeah but this chapter was so great and you capture Hermione's insecurities perfectly! I can't wait for the next chapter I hope Draco has his way with her mmmmmmmmmmm ;D
person gabby1234
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you are so super freaking awesome and this fic is fanfiction at it's best! Next time your in the mirror i request you think "I am super freaking awesome and a freaking fantastic writer!" Because that would be my message to you if i saw you in person. Also man how cool would this have been if this were like an actual 7/8th book? Oh if only my dramione could ended up together, you rock! T hank's so much for this story!
much love to ya can't wait for more!
person gabby1234
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you are so super freaking awesome and this fic is fanfiction at it's best! Next time your in the mirror i request you think "I am super freaking awesome and a freaking fantastic writer!" Because that would be my message to you if i saw you in person. Also man how cool would this have been if this were like an actual 7/8th book? Oh if only my dramione could ended up together, you rock! T hank's so much for this story!
much love to ya can't wait for more!
person OdietAmo
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...this is undeniably one of the best DM/HG fics I have ever read. The tension in the story builds beautifully, and you're style of writing conveys their thoughts and feelings very well. I'm already looking forward to more. ^^
person Anon
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oww, so sorry to hear about your poor tooth which in turn makes everything else feel totally rotten. I hate anything to do with dentists too. Am sending lots of virtual huggles to help make you feel better. Congratulations on all your wins at the awards, you deserve them - well done you. :) Now my complaint - where was the tissue warning???? I cried through most of that to the point that I could hardly read the chapter. Those bloody stubborn magical folk !!!! I want to shake the pair of them. And I also want to shake you for stopping it where you did - you evil cliffhanger wench you. LOL Now get better, write more and post soon - I insist!!. :)
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My god
I love it
Can't wait for the rest!!