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for Claiming Hermione

by ilke

schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Now that was hot! Hot, sexy, and on point. Great job, once again!
person ExperimentalMe
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Please update soon!
person doodle
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It took all of yesterday & today but I could not stop reading. During yoga class this morning I was wondering if I could find some time to read. Your story is magnifcent! (my spelling is not) I eagerly await the next update.
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hot, streamy, and simply romantic.. he is good to eat... and your descriptions omg, they are simply enchanting.... Please do not forgive us and keep them coming....
person Anon
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Either I missed a chapter or my review disappeared, I'm not sure which. At any rate, the last review there that I can make sense of has me back at chap 27 so it is from there that I will bombard you with my delight of your tremedously wonderful story. LOL

28 - Poor Hermione, not so much that she's lost her mind but the fact that her mind, her heart and her body want different things. And LMAO - I can just imagine Ron's reaction to the thought of Draco being inducted into the Order, truth serum or not. And her reaction to the news that Draco is about to join..........are not good. LOL Don't you just love having a confrontation with someone who gives you an 'I don't know' answer??? I can see why she would feel betrayed that he told Harry and not her given that she's in the Order, but I can also see how it threatens her when she doesn't know how she truly feels about him - as Draco just so cleverly guessed. :) So he's just going to sit back and wait for her to make up her mind and come for, I mean, to him. LOL

Now what is Peeves up to with this latest carry on? Poor thing bored? Hee hee, whatever, it's an opportunity for our lovebugs to be out and about isn't it? Not that I like the thought of Peeves spying on any little tryst they might have - yeesh! Ah but no, it's a very early morning time of reflection for Hermione instead - blast!! LOL I suppose I should be happy that she's taking the time and not rushing into things even though I want her to. And bloody hell, just when she gets there and has made up her mind all he does is drag her into the bed and goes to sleep???? Awwwwwwwwww come on!! LOL And on to the next chapter......
person Anon
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'd love to chat with you more than just a few words on here (as long as it didn't take away form your writing time) LMAO I'm not on LJ though. I have Facebook, MSN and good old fashioned email. I'll put that in a seperate review and then delete later. You can let me know if you missed it when you next update.

Aww, how delightful to wake from the dream and find the dream object really there. Good thing she's still breathing seeing as she's been squashed under him all night (not that I'd be complaining about it either). LMAO Even the way he's touching her seems dreamy, what a way to wake up for Hermione too. (I must not be jealous of fictional characters). That was perfect, I could actually feel the moment their eyes met in the gloom and see the spark that crossed between them. And all these slow caresses - is it wrong of me to yell out, 'hurry up and get on with it already'? That's enough teasing, alright! LMAO

"Slow, languid kisses that stretched out like taffy" - Beautiful description, absolutely perfect! The last few paragraphs were sweet, touching and wreaked of innocence taking me back to a time I have long forgotten. I'm not sure I should thank you or glare at you now. LOL What a wonderful chapter!!

So, I have another story to read, I see and I hope you had a wonderful festive season and I look forward to more of this delish story (soon) too. :)

schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOvED it!!!! Update ASAP
person ExperimentalMe
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great beginning!
person ExperimentalMe
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I loved Draco's thoughts on sex and his masturbation. Bravo.
person elladee
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I definitely enjoyed the morning after scene! ;) Great chapter, I love the connection you've built between Draco and Hermione. I can hardly wait to read more~

Congratulations on your Dramione Awards wins~!! :D