rate_review Reviews

You write in such a beautiful language its hard not to feel the magic of their love and sexual tensions. Hayyy! It was definitely worth the wait!

This was simply brilliant, it light my day... It was a waiting worth while... Please do not keep us in suspense on Draco's OOP meeting... and please when they say I love you make them at the same time before battle please...

You do realise I'm going to have to take up smoking just so I can puff on a cigarette after reading such hot chapters like this. LMAO

BEEEEAUTIFUL...incredibly well-written and full of emotion. Excellent! I can 100% picture the entire scene; very vivid writing!

Wow, I LOVE this story! They are completely believable and I can't wait to see how you handle the Order meeting.

Haha bloody right you are about not wanting them to jump into the sack so soon. The anticipation is making it soooo much better. I can't wait to get to the part when they finally get together! Great story. :)

This is a fantastic story. I am thrilled t have found it, it's truly something special. You have a way with this pairing that really draws the reader in, making them both highly relatable but also independent of themselves (so while I understand their emotions, it's not necessarily something I would feel myself and yet I *get* them, you know?)

Anyway, I'm glad to hear there won't be tooooo much of a wait for the next chapter, because I'll admit I am not the most patient reader! So don't feel you have to respond to this review, I know you get tonnes and to be honest, I'd rather you just write the next chapter! LOL

Take care and GREAT work, dear!

This is an awesome fanfic. =]] I love the build-up of the tension and relationship and then the impending climaxes (pun definitly intended LOL). I read het/straight pairings every now and then but this is just awesome, it is definitly going on my fave lists. I have LJ too (http://raven-tiger.livejournal.com) and it would be awesome if you 'friended' me. You should update soon. Can you send me an e-mail when you update.-hugs- Raven.

this is a brilliant work of fiction and is deffo going right up there with my all time faves, i sat and read it in one sitting and it took me nearly all night, lol... i love the steady build up of the relationship it makes it much easier to believe that things wouldnt change over night, i love dracos dilemma with himself over falling for her, i remember reading somewhere that you couldnt write a true romance story without it ending in angst and i really hope that that isint the case with this one, i understand that a fluffy ending might be a bit hard to write into the situation with it being war time and everything but all im asking for is for it not to break my heart like a few ive read... i cannot wait to see where this one ends up... i am awaiting with bated breath for the next chappy!!

Good heavens girlie, what an incredibly lovely chapter. I want them together for the long haul. I adore how they made small physical discoveries with each other, oh to feel the first bloom of love.... She would be shocked to know how much he does want her. That whatever claim she wants to make on him, he wants it desperately. I feel for the two of them, it's hot, angsty, and just so wonderfully written. Beautiful chapter Ilke!