rate_review Reviews

Goodness. This is such an amazing story. Really gorgeous. I like how you built things up, built up an attraction and even had them kiss before Harry had to handle the Rites and what it meant to complete them. Draco was so interesting and I liked in particular, one thought Harry was thinking when he was confused (not unpleasantly) over Draco and how to interpret Draco's words as an insult or as a joke. His amusement and growing enthrallment in Draco while losing interest in the Muggle Studies teacher was really well-written. I like the end, when the healing had taken place, that not even Ginny and her lover could ruin the moment. Draco accepting the Nicotine patch, like Rose, and smiling when he heard about the Rites, I really loved them both here. You did a fantastic job with this peice.

Oh, this was beautiful. Very well written, with humour and feeling. I loved it. It's great as a oneshot, but I'd like to read more and find out which of them, or if both of them, are pregnant, and what the baby/babies would be. Simply lovely and enchanting. Well done!

Wonderful story. I would love to know which one had a child or if both did. Excellent story.

you gotta love Luna...

Omg I absolutley adored it! I wish you would write more for this one!

It's going to be two children blessed by the rite and two very pregnant men to deal with!

oh hahhahhaha i think their both going to get preggers! HAHHAHAHAHA!