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for The Spell

by Anthimaeria

schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was amazing. I had wondered about the Imperious curse, and I think you handled that issue brilliantly. I found Ron's character really intriguing, though I'm not convinced of Draco's perspective, though Ron did seem rather immature and petulant...more than usual anyways. Hermione and Snape was cool too, though I do wish it didn't seem as if Hermione got top marks because she was with Snape. I really loved the ending here. Wonderful job with this.
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely. Simply lovely.
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I sooo love this!
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, good job. I agree with your interpretation of so many things: that Hermione's too good for Ron, who's a prat, that they would have gone back to repeat their last year, and that there would be post-war angst to be dealt with. This story is how I *wish* JK had ended the series! Also, I liked lots of random little parts, such as the Samovar collection. Nice work and thanks for sharing! (and it was hot).
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow!