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for A Fine Line

by roxierose13

person Anon
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was lovely I hope you write another chapter that'd be great.
person Polgaran
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fuck you're good !
person Silverkitten
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was amazing!!! The ending was perfect. You're a very good writer. The sex was more realistic than a lot of stories I've read, and you kept them in character very nicely.
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh you have to continue!!! I've gotta have more!!!
person kittycat30
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whew! Loved it!
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh how i wish he would explain! ha.