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i hope this isnt forgoten its a good story

A great chapter. I look forward to reading more to see what happens.

Oh my, when they decided to take advantage of Draco, they sure exploited the uppertunity:-) I could have felt sorry for him, but I won't:-), besides, his groping of Hermione shows that he is more than capable to exploit the situation himself too. But, at some point, Draco would be missed by someone, wouldn't he? And, is the potion making him have to grow up all over again or does it work only for a while? I guess I am wondering how long Severus will be able to upheld the charade of him having adopted a child? And, if or when Minerva realise that Severus have duped her again (with the help of the Gryffindor Golden Brain)will there be a school left to teach at when her anger raptures? (I recommend that Severus has to be sadled with a couple of evil twins or a Longbottom junior as a suitable revenge for his scheeming...:-))

This was a great chapter. I am glad that Severus found a way to get around the law, but how will he explains where Draco is, if someone begins to look for him. I look forward to reading more.

Mmmm., I think your story needs a lot of work, I am no native speaker (or writer for that matter) but I noticed a lot of spelling/grammar mistakes. After reading a few sentences I stopped, because I did not have a clue as to who is who and why . It was all rather vague. I do like your idea of the adoption law. it's rather original!

Aw, poor Snape got busted (the wooden child) LOL! This story is quite delightful and funny. I look forward to reading more!

Thank you so much for the update! What I must really compliment you on is that this new chapter made the story even more interesting than it was before. While I love the Hermione/Severus pairing, and I think the adoption challenge is almost as great as the Marriage Law challenge, what I love more than anything is when the author gives me a Hermione who stands up for her self, who is just as snarky and scheeming as her (our) "beloved" Potions Master. Hermione "the shrinking violet" aint the Hermione who saved Harry's and Ron's asses through 7 books, neither the one who served Umbrigde on a platter to the Centaurs or sent her parents to Australia to save them. I just love the Hermione in this chapter, and when you present both of them willing to conduct expriments on a drunk Draco, you have my undevided attention and admiration:-)) Update again soon!

Oh no. Are they thinking what I think they're thinking? Great update, I can't wait to see what happens next!

Another great chapter. I look forward to reading more soon.

Enjoying your tale... please continue.