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for Ashes of Armageddon

by emilywaters

schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor severus....and Harry is evil. :( I love it though! More please!
person abbicee
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have a weakness for slavery stories, especially if Snape is the slave. I love the first two chapters and can't wait to read more. I'm curious what Severus meant when he said this was his penance. Did he mean that Dumbledore set this up for that or that he accepted this as his penance? In both cases I can't help wonder why? Hope to read more soon.
person kunitsu
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I didnt expect Hermoine to be the one who was keeping Severus in a coma. I really think there is more reason as to why Harry became that way, looking forward to finding out why
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like but i hate that harry is going to hurt sev
person 'mnstr
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
EW, you continue to amaze and enthrall your readers.
person hey.hey.monkey
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great plot line, I am once again enjoying some nice snarry from you... the plot seems interesting once again it doesnt seem wuite as morbid as a few of the others however it is just the beginning. It seems good, i cant wait until the next chappy. oh and THANK YOU for posting soooo often!
person cravedom
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Back at it again! MMM this one sound delicious, Snape slaved is always hot. Harry makes a sweet slave because he is so young and pure and has a good heart. Snape is a different matter. Imagine being able as a young men to own an adult that made your life miserable while growing up, having the power for once. Is a dream come true!!! And if the dream comes with a tall body and a sexy voice, then we just call it perfect.
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooh, this looks interesting - I'll be excited to read more. I wonder where Harry learned about masterless men? Well, thanks for sharing.
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Ch. 2 Penance indeed. That really sucks that it went down like that. Thank goodness Hermione believed in him and kept him asleep...I can't stand Percy's azz....The forehead? Harry sounds pissed...:::shudder:::
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHOA! Evil!Harry! Woot! I cant wait for more!!