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for Ashes of Armageddon

by emilywaters

person icekit
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, such a interesting dark fic! I do hope that eventually Harry will realize the truth about Sev...? Please update soon! :D
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
iknow dark harry but what happens once harry realize he's wrong the quality the pain harry poor harry and there no words for the pain sev will go through
person Midnight Rain
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOLY CRAP!!!!! You made Harry sooooooooooooo DARK!!! But it's good! It's different from what i've read before! And i've read so many stories so far! Please update soon! Looking forward to it!
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting. the first fic that i heard of that has Snape as the servant, it's usually Harry that's the servant. when and why did harry go dark?
person kunitsu
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah yes and I believe the story of where Harry saw that look will be an interesting story. Well that was an unexpected list for the things that Severus should be punished for. Now that smile at the end spells pain for Severus doesnt it. I am both looking forward and dreading the next chapter, I hope Harry doesnt hurt Severus too much
person abbicee
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm guessing that little temper tantrum of Snape's is going to cost him, but I also guess Harry had plans on hurting him anyway so I suppose it doesn't matter. Earlier Snape asked what his rights were, will Snape have any rights other than the fact Harry can't kill him without causing his own death? Can't wait to see just what Harry has planned in the next chapter. Hmm. Somehow that last just didn't come out right.
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Harry is super scary in this fic! You do it so well! Thanks for updating!
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG..Harry is positively and dangerously creepy in this so far. I love how he's not really showing all of his cards or even being outright abusive and angry. The scariest type of sickos are the still quiet types. I feel so bad for Severus, he's going to pay big time and most of it he doesn't deserve. I hope Hermione and Ron or someone will intervene before Harry takes it too far. I can't wait though to see how Harry plans to go toe to toe with his former Potions instructor. What was up with the shower scene? Did Harry conjure those thoughts of Lily in Snape's head..it was absolutely creepy to picture Snape opening his eyes after thinking about her to see Harry staring at him with a smirk....how wicked is he? I guess we'll find out soon....
person cravedom
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The tension between Snape and Harry is so high that I read in fear of what will happen in the next line. Is a psychological thriller!
It looks like the battle between good and evil is not over
person 'mnstr
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
damn woman!!!!

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