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for Ashes of Armageddon

by emilywaters

schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Ch. 5 Harry is freaking me out a bit. And he's right, him being kind is sort of more unnerving than any curse he can hurl. I wonder if he's dealing with a split personality situation or if he's really being intentional and conscious about everything he's doing. There is some hope since "a shadow of regret" crossed his face...but I sort of want to see how far he takes it, but the other part of me wants Sev to be as comfortable as possible and get out of this quickly...but then the story would be over..and that's no fun,lol. Go Ron and Hermione, once again to the aid of the underdog. I love the way you always weave them in your stories...OK, off to read Ch. 6
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Ch. 6-I'm SO glad he finally found out who died on the side of the light. Hugo is cute and I'm glad he brought Sev some laughter, however brief it was. And DAMN at the whole Ginny situation. I wonder what happened? I bet she saw some things or experienced something at the hands of Harry that sent her running for her and son's life. She even took Kreacher? Sounds absolutely frightening...I can't wait to hear what he did to cause that. And awww...Sev gets to go back home at least to pack, I hope he brings something useful to defend himself despite what Harry ordered.
person kunitsu
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow those last two chapters were surely something else. Your story is taking me in for one hell of a ride. The changes between Harry's kindaness and cruelty is just wow. Keep up the great work with all those twists
person qwerty
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am really digging this story. It's really good.
update!
person Midnight Rain
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! Poor Sev! Did Ron and Hermione even notice his hand or did they not just say anything? It's getting so interesting! PLease update soon!
person SoftObsidian74
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have to finish this! the last word in the sentence got cut off! Wow Victor Hugo's story makes so much sense here.....that's deep, but then we wouldn't expect any less from Hermione would we? : )
person SoftObsidian74
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OK, now that the sentence is complete....how sad but I do appreciate the dialogue between Sev and Hermione. It's refreshing after Sev's time with Harry. Hermione and Ron may be his mental saving grace in this tale. So sad they are holding off on the wedding to wait until Harry returns to normal. I just hope they aren't waiting in vain :(
person kunitsu
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow I never expected Hermoine to name thier son because of Severus. Will Severus be actually able to keep that nail since it can be considered as a weapon

I just realized this is the first story I have ever read where it is Harry's friends who believe that Severus is innocent and not Harry.
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit!! that last line...wow. Harry is that far gone huh? This chapter really was something..Sev was bonded to Dumbledore? That makes perfect canon sense....as usual you find a way to explain canon events so that they could have been canon themselves! Hermione crying for Sev was touching...and whoa about Harry getting darker every month and year. What a good point about Tom and friends...I just hope he has them in the end before they get sick of him, have to kill him or he does something to them. Can't wait to hear what went down with Ginny ...
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Snape is right...Harry is crazy. He scares me. I truly do feel for Snape. A powerful Harry gone psycho is not a pleasant sight...*shivers* Thanks for updating.