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for Ashes of Armageddon

by emilywaters

schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am afraid that you are giving me false hope! Don't do that. I don't like false hope... I like the real kind!
The way you do this makes everything seem so natural and not out of character. You are so great. -Gives you a chip.- YaY!
KP
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*cries* I want Harry back to normal too! *hugs plushie Snape* If only just to see Snape is ok...Excellent update! Will Harry ever figure out who he is supposed to meet? Will we know why he didnt?! Please more soon!
person kunitsu
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww Hugo is so sweet. Why do I get the feeling that this chapter maybe the start of Harry's true change and I just wonder if Harry is still meant to see Dumbledore on Kings Cross.
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting. i finally get what the title means. lol...took me awhile to think it over. it's sort of the aftermath of the battle and how the characters are reacting to the things that happen in their lives. sort of what Ginny did when she left Harry or something like that.....did that make any sense? if not then to bad. lol.
person qwerty
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Loved the song.
update!
person Lora
schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are a great writer. I have read all your stories and always look forward to the next one. So far I think this is going to be your best one. Keep up the good work!
person cravedom
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Earlier I said that the old Harry would have thought about hitting Snape with the ruler but not actually done it; this morning my thoughts differ. Harry never had impulse control but he stayed good because he did not have evil thoughts (unlike me). Now I wonder if these thoughts are really his
person cravedom
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wao! I will have the image of Snape holding his bruised hand under the water while sobbing forever burned in my mind. To my shame what made the biggest impression is that I really could not find fault in Harry
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So I don't think that Harry really killed Voldemort. I think that the small piece of Voldemort's soul is still inside of Harry... Or something... Or he really is just this big of an ass... But I don't think so... something about it just seems fishy... Like he progresses with time gets darker and darker... It isn't like he is testing the field to see what he can get away with it is as if he HIMSELF is getting darker... Does that make sense? I sure hope it does. lol. I hate evil Harry's... lol. But you are doin' such a great job I can't stop reading specially after your last story. -dies- You are a God. You should really take my last comment in consideration and do a Draco/Neville story or Ron/Remus... You are like one of the only authors that would be able to get a good reason for them to be together and make a story I would actually like.

Cheers.
KP
person kunitsu
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah so that is where Severus believes that he needs penance for but shouldnt the need for that be null since Dumbledore ordered hSeverus to kill him. I really am getting curoius as to why Harry is like that, cna you at least tell us when you will reveal the reason he is like that. I just do hope that Harry's friends will keep him from going completely dark