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This is so intense. I love it. Great writing!
update!

Wow. Absolutely mesmerizing fic. I look forward to some PWP soon, please!

Poor Harry...he doesn't even know why he's f*cked up! And now Sev knows that nobody knows.....i wonder what's going on with him when he's having these crying fits....i'm glad it was him that told ginny to take their son and kreacher away...a piece of the old harry once again shows up....yay for sev being brave enough to probe....i hope we get to see the diary! I'm so curious!

*shivers* Harry creeps me out in this fic. Oh I wish he would remember...Thanks for updating!

So yeah I am pretty sure there is something wrong with Harry it's like he is at war. Anyways I read your profile and you like happy endings... So I am hopeful this will end good.
Neh?
KP

Oh so that why Harry is being so kind to Severus despite the circumstances. I just wish he knew what Severus told Hermoine but then again it might not make a difference.

@Ch. 9 Wow...this chapter was really powerful and communicated so many things all at once. I LOVE Hugo in this story, he captures the hope and humanity that we hope Harry will come back to, and he's a great tension reliever and comedian in his own right. That conversation he had with Harry was frightening because it was so simplistic and subtle. I wonder what Harry did to scare Ginny away? His threat to Severus was really terrifying...but then that song (by the way kudos to you for having Harry do the song bit this fic LOVED it) was really revealing. I wonder why Harry didn't meet Dumbledore at King's Cross, what went wrong and how that has to do with why he is the way he is now. I can't wait to find out....which makes the title for this chapter so freakin' cool, because we're all waiting for the epiphany. It was nice to see a glimpse of the old Harry and to know that he's still in there...somewhere. I know that moment he and Snape shared was fleeting but it was so touching. I hope he doesn't go psycho and punish Snape for seeing him cry....AWESOME chapter Emily.

Oh yeah, loved this bit:

@Ch. 10. OMG...Harry is so freakin' scary in this fic...the brutality and unexpected reactions he has to things...Sev can never know when it's coming. I'm scared for him. The hair braiding seemed so innocent at first, but of course it couldn't be with him doing it....need to know where this is going now!

I have only read the first three chapters and I already don't like it. What in the name of Hades is wrong with Harry? I'm sorry, but Harry is so drastically OOC. Ashlin Raine.

Where do you get all ur ideas???? I wish my stories could be as good as mine. This chapter was really interesting. Even though it doesn't seem like it you can still tell Harry is trying to brake Severus. Keep the good ideas flowing, and please update soon!!!