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o.O wow poor Snape blood quills are so evil! Then Nevil...wow he sounds so lazy but I wonder if it's just a plan to get Snape out of the house *crosses fingers* instead of what Harry is thinking....but who knows...

WOW. Chapter 13 literally just blew my mind. I wasn't sure if it would go that far, but you've crossed a line I was DYING for you to cross. This is wonderfully extreme. I'm beginning to wonder if maybe during Harry's blackout, he took back that little crying baby soul thing of Voldemort's and is now being possessed? Or did the entire King's Cross thing not happen at all? I wasn't sure if maybe Harry just didn't remember. And thank you so much for such fast updates. I check every day for new chapters for this story because it's just so well written and the plot is brilliant and engaging. You had me hooked from the first chapter. I daresay, I wish they were a tad longer, but then I suppose that's because you always leave your reader hanging on for more. As for Neville, I am so glad about the direction you're taking him in. I love when Snape is thrown for a loop. Hermione and Ron are extremely likable and in character (I love little Hugo!), and Harry is deliciously dark and wonderful. The inner struggle you have him experiencing is definitely getting crazier. I love it. And with the way Snape carries on when he's around Harry, makes me think back to when Harry was rebellious against him. It's refreshing to read something this well thought out and plotted.

This is so intense. And I love every minute of it!
Great job!
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Nice one Neville and Hermione! Gave Harry the slip! *shudders* He controls their minds...creepiness. Thanks for updating!

Well that was unexpected, like Severus I didnt expect that Harry might actually send his dairy to Hermoine hut I guess it shows that there is still hope for him. Let's just hope that with Severus on thier side they can figure it out faster.

ooo Harry has gone mad lolz ^_^ wonderfully exciting! Can't wait to see if he catches on what they're doing.

This story is very well written, and thoroughly thought out. I enjoyed reading it very much, and will be waiting with eager anticipation for your next update!

Also, thank you for the review. It made me grin like a fool for a while.

~Ru

interesting once again. Neville seems the same, it seems like he didn't change that much. i thought the blood quill would have been used the first time.

Wow this story is really taking me up on roller coaster ride. Harry just changes from the kind Harry to near being the Dark Lord Harry in an instant. It's amszing you can write it in such a flow that you can only notice the change if you look for it, it creepy but amazing

Is Harry repressing the memory/dream of when he was talking to Dumbledore while in Limbo (which looked like King's Cross)? This happened right before Narcissa "woke" Harry up. Or in your story, did that happen at all?
Great chapter.
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