AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Ashes of Armageddon

by emilywaters

schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was very interesting...I'm glad Neville let him have it....but he's still loves him and that's so sweet. Harry knows he's disappearing eh? He's so bizarre in this story, but fascinating nonetheless. I'm glad he let Sev at least touch him and that was sweet him trying to soothe Sev but then there goes that anger again...So sad to hear that he thinks his mother would have done everyone a favor if she hadn't protected him as a baby. He's in so much pain...something bad is about to happen isn't it? crossing fingers...that it doesn't, well, sorta. : )
person kunitsu
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok that reply of yours was scary cause it made me think that there might be no more hope for Harry. I think his sickness goes both ways, his evilness increases but his kindness towards Severus increases as well. I think Harry is getting very confused now or maybe he has been for a long time, he doesnt know his purpose anymore cause Voldemort is dead. Maybe thats why he is acting this way, he wants to die so he doesnt have to be confused and hurt anymore

Ok now where did all that come from *shrugs* Now time will tell if I am write :D
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Neville was cute
person qwerty
schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is SO good!! I love it!
update!
schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yet another lovely written chapter! I can't wait to see if their assignments bare fruit!

Looking forward to your next update,

~Ru-Shin
schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! They're making progress! It's obvious that *something* went wrong, I just hope they hurry up and figure out what before it's too late. I love that Snape is working with his former Gryffindor students on how to help his most loathed student, lol.
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@ Ch. 12. How terrifying that Harry will lash out at Sev for any little thing at anytime. This punishment in particular is deeply disturbing because they both know that Sev was in the wrong when he did what he did. What's really sad is that Sev has paid for his crime many times over and Harry is really putting him back into hell and making him pay undue penance again. And Poor Sev, feeling so guilty and responsible that he pushes himself to hurt himself more than necessary. I hate Harry right now. And that bit about Hermione, that's so nasty of both Neville and Harry. I kinda hope Neville gets his face cracked by Severus for what he's doing at some point.
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Ch. 13. Oh damn...Harry killing someone to create a Horocrux??? Has it really come to this...I'm glad that Sev was able to convince him to share his diary with Hermione and I'm so GLAD Neville is not trying to use Sev. I love their plot to get Sev away from Harry. I hope whatever they're working on works for Harry's sake. How bizarre that Harry is infecting everyone with his presence...what in the hell IS he right now? Something else? I loved that Ron, Hermione, and Neville remain unaffected though, can't wait to find out why...Am a bad person because I want to see Harry go almost totally mental before they bring him back if he can even come back that is...
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
woah!! that's was unexpected. but in a good way. please update, i want to see what else will happen.
person kunitsu
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What was that, I didnt expect Harry to put down Neville so much and there it is again that wierd sense of justice Harry has. Damn Severus is torturing himself pretty well here.