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for Ashes of Armageddon

by emilywaters

schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
woah!! crazy!! but good crazy. lol. i thought it had to do something with voldemort, but i also thought it was something else too. so they plan to set up a trap or something. i hope they can save Harry. i'll continue reading to find out more!!
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! @ Preparations!!! Whoa, I was NOT expecting that. You really threw me for a loop. Harry kidnapped Hugo??? And was just going to pat them all on the back for coming up with a brilliant plan....why am I genuinely scared!? Brilliant storytelling here...I'm seriously worried for everyone in this fic, even Harry, the believably evil bastard that you've created. OK, I know I should read the next chapter right away, but honestly, I'm a bit nervous...
person minijo
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, the drama is gripping and the latest tale twist leaves me wringing my hands for Severus.
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Go Hermione!!! I hope she figures something out! I can't believe Hugo has to stay with Lee, he's a rapist now, I don't care if he has kids of his own. Harry sucks! lol. I can't believe he knew it was Neville all along, although I can totally see that, because Neville is a sweety and probably isn't a very good liar, even if he looks like someone else. Harry has to know how far gone he is....I mean he must know. I think it's funny how he told Hermione to shut up after she tried to explain what was wrong with him, maybe he knows but is losing the battle? Poor Severus, the humiliation just keeps on ticking huh? I can't believe this is gonna end in like 8 chapters...I can't wait to see what you have in store, and I'm still holding out for a not completely dark ending, but if it does end that way, then so be it, either way, I'm looking forward to seeing how this goes down.
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I HATE YOU! That's final!
person Ellanath
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh the suspense is killing me! I love this story!
person LadyJayVee
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're an evil, evil woman and should become Harry bond-slave. Not only did you dash my moment of pleasure, hoping there was a light at the end of the tunnel for Severus, but another cliff hanger. NOT NICE! You are a master on when to end a chapter (that's a complememnt even if I'm mad at you). I was thinking about where you were going with this story earlier today and for a fleeting moment I wondered if Harry would find out about the 'new' trio and foil their plans but stupid me thought there was no way in hell Emily would take away the only hope Severus had. Wrong!!! Now, if you please, finish the next chapter and post it and get me out of my misery. (Love this story if I haven't said so)
person Carleigh
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DAMN IT ALL

WHAT A GOOD CLIFF HANGER

.....can not wait until you post again
this one seemed semi predictable compared to your other work. BUT its good to be predictable once in a while. OMG
loved it.
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
but i still don't like new trio.i want old trio.i hope harry doesnt die.and he becoming old harry.
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Severus how he will deal with this and Longbottom having to watch what was done to Severus.???
Hooked on this and anxiously awaiting an update.