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for Ashes of Armageddon

by emilywaters

person Ellanath
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooo I just loved the last sentence!
person cravedom
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, I did not think Tom would have awareness; does he? Well either it will be interesting to see how Harry responds. Poor Severus does not know what he wants anymore one minute he turns himself in thinking that Harry will turn his sickness to others and the next he is trying to goad Harry into killing him. Severus is under such pressure that I find amazing he is even able to have coherent thoughts, the physical pain is one thing but the horror of knowing what Harry is and the lack of hope has to be overwhelming.

Poor Hugo, I wonder what he is thinking right now and after observing Lee
person Jean Lamb
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my. And if Harry is killed by killing Snape (Unbreakable Vow), there may be enough of Tom for him to survive in Harry's body.
person Fairner
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
o.o this chapter was so hard for me to read >< i was wincing when harry started with the knife. i wonder if severus is trying to remove tom by calling him up from inside harry erg does that make sense? um maybe harry will be i don't know awake or something arg i can't type it T__T well i cant wait to know what happens next =P
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Will Harry ever snap out of his "power high"?

I love this story so much. I just clicked on it randomly one day and now I wait eagerly for each and every update. So please, put my out of my anxiety and update soon.
person Laura
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! All of your chapters leave me wanting to read more. Your Dark Harry left me shivering. I can't believe I'll be at camp for a month- but maybe when I get back the story will be finished! I'm going to end up checking for it before I say "hi" to any of my friends, I swear.
I feel like Harry can never recover from this... which is sad. So, yeah, I feel like he'll have to die for there to be a happy ending. But a part of me just wants Severus to convince him to be good again...
I may end up crying if there's a sad ending. I love your writing style.
~Laura (Hazel Love back at the other site)
person Luvdonite
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
noooooooooooo!!!!!! please don't let Harry go. give him a chance to fight. give me some hope. lol
person qwerty
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved Severus' last line.
After all the torment he just went through, he still had enough muster for that. Amazing.
update!
person Neinka
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have so much thoughts ...And my english is so bad that i cant tell you much....But what i can is pray. Really...I beg you for good ending(at last for Severus?...Please? No?..Ok..*sniff*)......I know..I know... you probably have already "end" of this story....
Aaah I must stop babbling......
Ok so ...Yours story is the most "purest" slavefic i ever read and thank you for it!(Bad end or good end :) )
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are by far one of my favorite authors... Oh lord update soon.. Please?
KP