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For someone who has just been repeatedly raped, Snape seems pretty low key about it. I mean even he would be a bit disturbed by something like that. I'm not critising your story because its brilliant and I stayed up all night reading it but I would have thought he'd have a bit of nervous breakdown after what he's been going through and still experiencing. Poor Severus. I shall continue to read some more tonight.

Amelia x

I've just read Ashes of Armageddon. It is the best Snape!slave fic I've ever read. The characters are so livid and beautifully written that I was almost hoping to live their lives forever)) The idea of grounded to dust horcrux permeated to Harry's soul got me ((( I thought there wasn't any hope for both of them. But you managed to create a miracle - trustworthy happy ending)) Thank you very much!

This is like nothing I've read before. The story is wonderful precisely because you finished Book 2, and didn't end with "well, it wasn't really your fault that all of those events happened" and the Killing Curse. The themes of this story are powerful, and the characters and descriptions convey them perfectly.

Hi, I don't usually review on this website, no material has ever captured my attention so immensely and I just couldn't finish and not tell you what an amazing job you did. It was beautifully written, excellent plot and and a very original idea. To be honest, I usually read Harry as the bottom in a relationship but this is so excellent and completely believable. I can practically see Harry becoming this person, there are no outlandish character changes, everything is purely believable. I can see Severus being the resilient person, you've portrayed him to be, headstrong and willful while hiding his emotions beneath a contempt-like sneer. I can also imagine him breaking, the tension becoming to much, crass appearing in his strong persona, just wanting to lay down and die. I want to say so much more but everything can be concluded in one simple sentence. You are an amazing writer and you managed to capture me into this brilliant story, a feat not many authors can do. Now that I've reviewed as requested, I am going to scour some of you other stories, hopefully unearthing more gems such as this one.
Loved the story, loved the writing,
Sammie

I just read the entire thing from beginning to end. It was a really beautiful story (really dark at first though). Loved it overall, keep up the good work!

amazing story...read it in one sitting.our detailing is amazingly realistic...i wish it was possible to publish this...but it is truly a snarry classic.

I like it, I really did, though there were a hell lot of typos in here, which usually totally scares me off (I'm not a native speaker and don't want to ruin my English by memorizing mistakes through reading them often).
You had some really new and interesting ideas in this stories und painted your charaters just beautifully. I especially liked Hugo and the reason for his name. Oh, and you've drawn a beautiful Neville.
Great job.

Wow, finished reading and toooootally loved and enjoyed the writing!

I love your storys and I did enjoy this one. I love how even though there was problems, they worked them out. It was sad in parts of it but like always it makes it more real than fantasy. I ould say more but what can you say when the story is over but thank you for a wonderful read and I will look for more of your stories and hopefully I will be able to review before the end of them.

Just like you asked after reading i am leaving a review, i really liked the story in the beginning i couldnt really undesrtand what's wrong with Harry seemed a bit strange to see him acting like that and read you repeating that the scene at king cross didn't happen i felt there was sthg i was missing when the idea of tom riddle's dust was revealed i was really impressed, it was really an original idea completely unexcpected but so logical if you really think about it especially the fear of certain people. After the king cross scene i really excpected an epilogue couldn't understand why we were continuing so i excpected problems but again you surprised me and the danger came from an unexcpected source again, Percy bashing really lovely i hate that guy. Anyway to sum it up i really loved your fic it's long, original, well written and i guess i will shut up now.