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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Although I wasn't expecting that from Severus, I'm happy to see him at his amused self. :D That was simply wonderful. lol Wonderful job.
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch 45:
lolz all sev's fault =P
lolz all sev's fault =P
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So harry is that sensitive? SEXY!
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was just sexy. I loved it. Totally and utter sensual, the way Severus touched Harry and made him come.
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Snicker--they both see the parallel (one reason both of them got along so well with Hagrid, I suppose). Cockatrice(s), Snape, and at times, Harry--they _should_ get along quite nicely! Won't breed in captivity, interpret magical barriers as a prison--I love the extra frills you throw in there to hammer the point home. Great chapter.
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
>///< This is hilarious! in a good way, im not making fun of your writing. Its magnificent actually ^_^ I just think the encounter very funny. And its cute how they're getting comfortable around each other. Keep up the good work
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm. That was delicious. Splendid chapter with just the right amount of fluff and smut. Please udpate again soon.
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes - it would be a sensible move for Harry to let Severus do the seducing and be the one who is leading in a sexual situation, until he's settled down and built up enough good associations with Harry's body not to be continually freaked out by the bad ones. It's much less threatening for Severus, and much less guilt-inducing for Harry, to have Severus be in command at this point and Harry being, or appearing to be, the needy one.
Couple of Britpicks in this one. Severus is probably much too dignified and of too old a generation to use an Americanism like "Sure" to mean "Yes, go ahead" - he would say "Fine". And he would not think of a chocolate frog as "children's candy" but as "a child's sweet". The word "candy" here in Britain is used for only a very narrow range of sweets, which do not include chocolate.
I was pleased to see you didn't follow the annoying and rather sadistic fanon habit of making chocolate frogs animate, btw. In the books it was only peppermint toads which moved, and then only after you'd swallowed them.
Couple of Britpicks in this one. Severus is probably much too dignified and of too old a generation to use an Americanism like "Sure" to mean "Yes, go ahead" - he would say "Fine". And he would not think of a chocolate frog as "children's candy" but as "a child's sweet". The word "candy" here in Britain is used for only a very narrow range of sweets, which do not include chocolate.
I was pleased to see you didn't follow the annoying and rather sadistic fanon habit of making chocolate frogs animate, btw. In the books it was only peppermint toads which moved, and then only after you'd swallowed them.
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the banter between Snape and Harry. It so adorable!
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
1 of the things I love about your work is that no matter how much I try to guess where is everything heading to,I NEVER NEVER can.Poor Severus,I really believe he needs some shoulder to cry on,aknowledge Harry's and his own feelings , and pretty fast i would say.Otherwise, he will never be able to accept the love he is being oferred as a genuine thing.Please go on with this awsome story....for all our sakes!!!!!!