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Geez, Severus is not a happy camper. What a grouch! But I can see where both he and Harry are coming from... still, it's rather hard to walk away from someone who just wants to love you. Oh well! Until next time.

i did not see that coming

Hello,
I found this two weeks ago and feel in love.I love how the char's work and how isn't not all love and bunnies. That people are hurt and it doesn't just go away with a sorry. I also love that snape knows so much about the bound and how it works. While the Harry is just stumbling alone in some ways because of pride. Also the fact he doesn't want to admit they are bonded. He has no clue what it really means or what it does. Just seems to think that love will win the day again.
I think snape has ever right to be bitter. Some of it I think is because he knows what I bond should be like. A part of him needs that like Tom/Harry said when he first picked him up. snape needs a Master. As I have gotten the chance to read most of it all together. I think that Tom was and at the moment a much better master. He was cruel and evil but he knew what it meant to have that bond with another person. So in a way I think snape will not be able to forgive Harry till he takes that place and shows him he can be Master with kindness and a firm hand.

i like your style of writing. It's nice to hear what the char's are thinking. I would like to know a little more of what is going on in Harry's head. Is he at battle with himself all the time? Does he think any moment he will become Tom. Does he panic or feel sick when he enjoys something Tom did. Does he wonder if He liked it and Tom learnt it off him? What does he think when he see's snape? Also how closely has he been watching snape?
Sorry for the 20 questions. Also sorry not much of a review. As you might be able to tell I am really into the story and want to know more. Can't wait for the next chapter.

-HallowsEve

why always they left harry.why not help harry.snape is left harry and its very mistake

Hey Emily, great chapter, I wonder if Severus will be able to trust Harry someday, everything seems to be really difficult. But after all this stuff Severus had been through, it's not a surprise. It's still my most favourite fanfic and I'm looking every morning if there is a new chapter.:-)

lol Severus gets Harry mad quite a bit XD is it to prove to himself that he does have some control over Harry haha well anyway hope the birds will be good and not petrify the hippogriffs, harry, and severus.

Another excellent chapter, Emily. I feel so sorry for Harry, though I completely understand Severus' reactions. I am tempted to join your new chapter/story notification list, however I have to admit I find enjoyment in simply checking up every day (sometimes twice :) ) just to feel the rush of pleasure and anticipation when I see a new post. :)

I disagree with Harry. He did take advantage of Severus. I don't really understand how Severus can see this otherwise, except that the bond may force him to believe it.

So does that mean the visit is off then? :( So this covenant...is it supposed to be an extra clause the "master" can add to the relationship? Hmmm. Interesting. I'm glad for his honesty, but I wish Severus could have taken the dream thing better. He only admitted to having enjoyment over having power, and assured that he wasn't interested or in any position to gain power. I just can't imagine having anyone who wouldn't enjoy at some level having power over the other, as long as it is equal in the long run (unless they are extreme hufflepuffs). To have this sort of buildup when not thinking of the wariness before, is quite sad. I hope for the end of the contract soon, because this seesaw between extreme servility (happiness at Harry's presence) and wariness, is rather sad to read. How much more of this book are you anticipating? Great job so far.

wow.First of all,I'm very sorry I didn'review last chapters.Sometimes it's just too dificult for me to write in English everything that your incredible story makes me feel.But this I can tell:I'm very grateful.This tale of dark and light,sadness and hope, and above all, LOVE trying to find its way,is really wonderful.Please post as soon as you can, and know that you have a faithful fan thousands of miles away.