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A promise...

A promise can be such a wonderful thing, it brings hopes and dreams and can even make one feel youthful and content. However when a promise if broken the heart ache makes one wish that the promise had never been uttered in the first place. I find promises scarry but in this case it does seem like a good thing.


I would like to hear more about the cockatrice, it is nice that they have this project in common,that gives them something to do other than thinking obsessively about the bond.


Will we get to see Albus at some point? Is he really afraid of Harry or is this in Harry's head? Sometimes adults have conversations around children that are overheard and we know there is a lot of things Harry did that were scarry. I do hope that his relationship with his kid get better over time.

very good chapter
keep up the good work
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I love Hugo! And of course he's precocious with Hermione as his mother! Although, I think there is also something a little bit special with Hugo beyond just good genes. There's just something about him that pulls you in.
Great chapter!

Very nice, I like how you are making them interact with each other more. Its like they are gaining back a little something that they had lost before

Severus being a bit of a biting puzzle himself, of course....

It's a very good point that Harry and Severus each feel, of the other, "I did something terrible but so long as he's survived, the situation isn't beyond hope."

And here I thought Hermione was smart. What do they all have in common? They all love Harry in some way shape or form. Duh... I had that figured out two chapters ago.

Okay, I'm big enough to admit when I'm wrong. In my defense, though, it was a good theory.

Oooo... Ballsy

Wow... that was really sad at the end there. Poor Harry. How will he live with hiimself?

very very good chapter keep going and post soon
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