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Are you trying to make me cry here? That was beautiful....I loved the humor in the beginning, it was much needed and I'm so glad that they're really friends, joking and such...and so much more as evidenced by this chapter. I loved the way Harry asked Sev to let him have his way....that was so HOT and at the same time it made me tense, hoping Sev didn't push him away, and I'm so glad he just let Harry have control. It was so sweet and loving the way he treated Sev, and how awesome was it that he found release from just having his mouth on Sev. And the last line...That was really....just wow Em, really nice chapter. I hope Sev does move in!

Hey Emily,

sorry I didn't review the last chapters. I'm have final exam, and a lot of stress and not much time left for other things.
This chapter was just great. I think this is my most favourite chapter so far. They are so great together. Finally Severus beginns to trust and to relax.
Can't wait to read the next chapter.

:-)

I suppose it's a matter of nomenclature but I wouldn't call that submission, and I wouldn't have thought Harry would - it's more like relaxing and going with the flow. It would probably be good for Severus, anyway - letting him know that it's possible to let his guard down and not be hurt as a result. But it would take months at least, probably years, to build up his self-confidence.

You know, I don't think anyone's ever asked to love Severus before. I'm sure he's more than a little frightened by it--but in this case the slave bond is actually helping him to lie back and enjoy it.

Still wonderful!

Very sweet. There was no little amount of "aww"ing coming from me with this chapter. Besides that one "Ooo" during the obvious scene. But seriously, nice. I love the comment about the range of Snape's eyes' emotions from Severus. :)

ty for the chapter! ^-^ also i'm not sure but when did harry stop wearing glasses again? or did he just not wear them in the beginning XD i've completely forgotten lolz. at least they're getting along now we'll have to see about the Killer Roosters...=)

Jeez the cockatrice are not very nice; are they? I don't know how Severus stood still while the cockatrice was face to face with Harry I know for sure I would have been screaming. This was a very good chapter, action packed and everything, it feels like the story is picking up the pace.

I'm glad the meeting between Neville and Harry went well, even if it was only a word. Especially since Severus decided to bring up that nonviolent means of enforcing the covenant was preferred. The Cockatrice encounter was interesting, and I must admit I was a bit frightened for Harry too. It was just like him to have expected something like that to happen, while saying that it would be fine. Nice job and I look forward to reading more.

Wow that was just great, those two are really making great progress