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for Ashes of Armageddon

by emilywaters

person Black Nightshade 7
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, that complicates everything. Perhaps a part of Tom Riddle lives in Al, I don't think he would recognize Severus otherwise...a little mini lord;-).....because he really doesn't behave like a normal child. but they can't just Avada Kedavra this part of Tom Riddle away, can they????

Good chapter:-)
person whitehound
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear - so this version of Al (btw you've mistyped him as "All" at one point) fears Severus because there's enough of Tom in him to know that Severus betrayed him. But is he canon Al with a gloss of Tom added, or is he actually Tom reborn? Is he actually Harry's son, or Tom's? I can't remember whether this Al has Harry's green eyes or not.
person Jean Lamb
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can imagine why Snape is little bit stunned to realize that this is his life now, and not just endurance. I had to laugh at the Cockatrices liking him (you know that the general reaction would be 'somehow, we were not surprised'). He and Harry are a couple now, not master and slave, and both Snape and Harry are surprised to realize they're now used to it. Brilliant.
person Jean Lamb
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No wonder Ginny looks tired, thinking she's raising Tom Riddle. _Her_ memories of Parseltongue can't be good ones, either--one wonders how much of it Harry spoke when he was in the Dust, and how much she heard it from a certain diary. Al's instant dislike of Snape is not a good sign, either. Good, scary chapter.
person tana97
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! as always. My hats off to you.
person Leentjef
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very very good chapter and please let te-hem cure Al END LET THEM BE FAMILY AGAIN
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND POST
BYE BYE
person Fairner
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so Al's got Riddle on the brain *cackles evilly* lolz but so does he hate his mom then? and why does he shrink away from harry? I get why he completely despises Severus but I really wonder what he said =P and Ginny's a bit of a pain but then again I never really liked her character...sorry if you like her though =)
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Ch 56. How sweet! I'm glad that they're really bonding and spending some real quality time together without the tension...the little talk they had in front of the mirror was so touching, Severus has truly come a long way. I love that Harry is making it clear to Severus that he wants him to be permanent part of his life. So funny Hugo has mastered the puzzle, he's such a smart boy and a great balance for them all after so much darkness. I really like this chapter, they need some brightness in their life...I just want it to last and get better, but you're the queen of the unexpected and angst, so I'm not holding my breath : )
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! That was quite unexpected (well sorta :P) Ginny is just shady....why wouldn't she tell Harry that Al speaks parseltongue...I wonder what all this means. I'm surprised that he feared Snape...is that Tom fearing Snape or something else...I'm intrigued and worried about them, they were doing so well!
person qwerty
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just when you think things are looking up for our boys...
I wonder what Al said. Did Ginny ever show pictures of Severus to Al to make Al react like that?
Very intriguing chapter. Keep going!