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tisk tisk Ronald. well that was a nice chapter please do update soon.

Great story, wow you just keep coming up with new twists in the plot :)!!! So does it have any significance that the covenant is broken? I mean is Harry going to do anything bad O.o? Hope not...they're doing so well right now...

That is so typical of the Ron character that showed throughout the books. His temper always alienates people until he calms down and then it takes alot to make him see the other side of things. I always thought this was a very selfish part of his character. Poor Neville, and the children, I hope things workout for them.

I would like to say something profound and meaningful but really at this moment my only thought is that Ron is an asshole. Understandibly he is upset about his missing child but really he is too much of a hot head and does not care about anyboddy elses feelings. I have to wonder now if he is not behind all this. OK, that may be my anger speaking since I like Neville but grrrrr Ron makes me so mad.


Darn woman just when I thought the story was getting fluffy.

omg he can't do that
keep going and post sooooooooooooon
bye bye

Holy crap! I can see where Ron is coming from but damn! That was one explosive ending to a chapter!
I like how you are keeping Ron in character because he always cracks under extreme pressure, and then flips out.
Really awesome chapter! Great job!

Well, this might not be the side I should be on, but I'm more convinced that Ron is right. Anything is possible as far as Ron being affected by the dust, or simply is reacting out of anger (probably reason to be honest), but I really do support only his character in how events have unfolded. I had forgotten those comments that Neville made, but I'm pretty sure ALL of them were made when the dust was still around (with Harry). So I can't laugh here at the hypocripsy. Even though I didn't like them when they were first made. I'm more convinced that Neville had nothing to do with the kidnapping, although I'm wondering at if he was telling the truth at the end of that story. I do hope that the suppose-to-be-dead Volemort will stop tearing couples and families apart, so I don't want Ron and Hermione to separate, or Al to have to die...or otherwise. I hope Ginny is able to reveal something more. I would have thought Ron was the culprit with how he has been acting, but with this reaction, I hope everything works out! Nice job. :)

While Neville is definitely in a seriously bad spot, his immediate safety as not at issue, whereas obviously the children's safety *is* a serious concern. And yet Hermione's focus of concern at the moment seems to be more for Neville than for her own son, so in that regard I have to agree with Ron and I understand that part of his anger. While I obviously would assume that Ron's got it wrong about Neville, I can see that he'd be very impatient with Hermione's focus on helping Neville, with no apparent consideration about what possible part Neville, the secret keeper, could have played in the kidnapping.

I can not believe that Neville is guilty, even if I understand Ron's point of view. I fear that despite all the talk that Al is 'only a child', something was triggered in him when he saw Severus, and he either convinced Hugo to run away with him, or staged their kidnapping some other way. Riddle was dangerous even as a child, after all, and it is the only way they were able to get around Neville. Another explanation would be that Neville and Ginny staged the whole thing to keep Al save, but why would they involve Hugo and kill Kreacher? No, I believe Al is responsible.

....I've only one thing to say. RON IS A ASS!!!