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November 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Finished the story and enjoyed the journey. How could I not love it when we get redemption and happiness in the end? I appreciate the fact that the story spans a long time period and that acceptance and love didn't just happen (as if by magic) overnight. There are some things even magic cannot fix, only time and hope.
I have you bookmarked so that I can check your other stories. Keep writing!
I have you bookmarked so that I can check your other stories. Keep writing!
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September 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
When I started reading this, I never thought I would get so attached. This was so amazing. You have amazing talent. The plot and characterization was spectacular. I love how every single character had more and more feelings for the reader to discover. This was truly a story of a lifetime--several in fact. I am glad you were able to stick with it into Book 2, and give your readers a chance to watch the characters grow apart and then together again. I was moved to tears by the love, friendship, and sacrifice that was laid out so boldly. Your talent is amazing. Thank you for sharing this with us.
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August 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just now hopping aboard the train here. Thank god, a good story. It's becoming increasingly hard for me to find anything that suits my taste. I tried to read a slave fic once, and it was full of love and happy fluff with Severus being so sweet and submissive. I can't imagine that ever happening. Finally, some angst, rape, and torture. You'd better not let me down! I love dark Harry Potter fics.
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July 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just want to thank you for the pleasure your story gave me. I have re-read it several times, especially the second part. I am very glad that you decided to keep it; it might have made sense to just let Harry and Severus stay apart, but it would really have made me feel unhappy for them :D
So, yeah, my review.
First, it's amazing the way you manage to write such, well, non-canon stories and keep everyone in character so well, especially Severus and Neville. I never felt that something the characters did was OOC.
Second, I love the humor. "Ashes..." is of course a dark and haunting story, but you manage to insert such great sarcastic and funny remarks that it is never overly dramatic and tragic.
Finally - and this is the most important thing - you have a very good understanding of psychology. Is it by any chance your speciality or are you just a thoughtful and understanding person? :)
Thank you again and I wish you good luck with your writing!
So, yeah, my review.
First, it's amazing the way you manage to write such, well, non-canon stories and keep everyone in character so well, especially Severus and Neville. I never felt that something the characters did was OOC.
Second, I love the humor. "Ashes..." is of course a dark and haunting story, but you manage to insert such great sarcastic and funny remarks that it is never overly dramatic and tragic.
Finally - and this is the most important thing - you have a very good understanding of psychology. Is it by any chance your speciality or are you just a thoughtful and understanding person? :)
Thank you again and I wish you good luck with your writing!
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June 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
loved it!!
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April 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome Story!!!
Hugo is by far my favourite character in this story.
Glad that everyone has a happy ending. Especially little Albus, Harry, & Snape.
Hugo is by far my favourite character in this story.
Glad that everyone has a happy ending. Especially little Albus, Harry, & Snape.
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March 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
A breathtaking story!!! One of the best I have read. Absolutely touching.
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March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! This was such a beautiful story. I can't even begin to explain how much I enjoyed it. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.
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February 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really dont know how to make a comment that makes justice to your story! I read it all in two nights and have become totally obsessed with it! I have started again from the beginning because its too good and I KNOW I missed a lot of nuances while reading the first time because really I had NO idea as to why Harry was Dark! Really excellent writing!
I didnt even know I liked Harry-Snape, I really like the slave!kink from before, and never considered HP fandom to get my fix, but really reluctant or broken but with H/C in the horizon slave!Snape is my new absolute favorite! Your story has made me OBSESSED with it. I liked how everything made sense, really. I feel anything I say would be inadequate for the quality of your work, I am like just saying WOW and thank you all the time. I truly hope you continue writing! Please! I loved this story very much, it made my weekend and knowing my obsessive self I will continue to re-read many times!
I didnt even know I liked Harry-Snape, I really like the slave!kink from before, and never considered HP fandom to get my fix, but really reluctant or broken but with H/C in the horizon slave!Snape is my new absolute favorite! Your story has made me OBSESSED with it. I liked how everything made sense, really. I feel anything I say would be inadequate for the quality of your work, I am like just saying WOW and thank you all the time. I truly hope you continue writing! Please! I loved this story very much, it made my weekend and knowing my obsessive self I will continue to re-read many times!
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September 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
to this day - this fic moves me.
it is so visceral and i reacted quite strongly to it. Slavefics are not my cup of tea but your writing style compelled me to keep reading. It was so beautiful to see your story develop - from such darkness to such a wonderful ending.
Mind if i mention you in one of my blogs? not a big deal other than a simple mention of good snarry authors out there. you deserve as muchpublicity as you can get...
love it!
T
it is so visceral and i reacted quite strongly to it. Slavefics are not my cup of tea but your writing style compelled me to keep reading. It was so beautiful to see your story develop - from such darkness to such a wonderful ending.
Mind if i mention you in one of my blogs? not a big deal other than a simple mention of good snarry authors out there. you deserve as muchpublicity as you can get...
love it!
T