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Holy fuck. -_- Seriously Ms. Waters? I spend all this time, believing that things could only be going on this uphill work for Book 2. Not that I wasn't fascinated in my own way of the disgusting nature of Book 1. I was. But now, Character death? And probably without the pretty lights of limbo? Frankly this has me on edge. That was the first thing I read before starting this chapter, and I was wide eyed, scanning but reading the material awaiting bad news. To be honest I can't really recall Percy's involvement in this story at all, but it didn't unplesantly surprise me that he was behind at least some of this horrid twist. I do wish that Severus would be smart enough to note that companionship is a good thing and to involve the others in the Percy-cornering manuever would be a smart thing to do. Since it is not Neville, probably (at all), it does worry me that the children are in Percy's hand, as I don't believe that he'd be quite so kind to the children. Wonderful job for almost causing my heart to stop from panic. lol I look forward to the next chapter.

Woo-hoo, a update..and boy what an update. I can see all the pressure that Ron and Hermione have been under. they both deserve a break after all they've been through. I can't wait until this mess with the kids is over...and yay! for hot Sev/Harry sexytime. : D And that damn puzzle, I knew it was no good...Percy always was a git, no surprise there, can't wait to see his full role in all of this...yay for smart Sev!! And Death? I wonder who you're gonna off? You evil woman you... *smirk*

Oooooh, I always KNEW Percy was an ass... Breathlessly anticipating another fabulous installment!

Damn. Percy bending so easily to the group's demands did seem a little suspicious... Severus' spying days serve him well here. Though wouldn't it better to wait till morning when everyone has a fresh start to confront Percy? Then he could have the gang's support. I'm eager to see what Percy has up his sleeve.
Great chapter!

Shit. This is getting so complicated, I 'm afraid to even guess what happened with Ginny and the boys. However I was thinking that those who were close to Harry when he was dusty -like Lee and George- may have developed a bit of paranoia mixed with guilt and could be trying to protect wizardkind. This new situation makes more sense as a team work. Of couse it can always be that someone who knows about the dust thinks that Harry's son would make a suitable Dark Lord and is still young enough to be easily manipulated. I could go on with 20 other theories but I just wanted you to see that this story is getting me all excited again. Death? Really?

wuuuuah, it's getting enthralling again :D Great you haven't written to long about Severus' recovery :)

I'm really excited what will happen next. Thank you for this superb story! (:

Wow that was rather unexpected from Percy, I wonder why he bugged that puzzle piece. This is getting more complicated than I thought

I would like to comment about Ron or Hernione or their reltionship, but they are your charcters and not mine. You are playing everyone beautifully for this story as always, but at some point after the angst and drama there will be a happy ending for Severus and Harry.? Loving the drama with everyone else, but you would never let anyone else pay for what they havn't done especially after all they (and we) have been through.

i don't care neville.i hope harry is good guy please.i love harry/snape.

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Is it just me or does Ron seem like he has the sprinkling of dust on him?
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