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Go Sev!! That's my Slytherin baby....he's back in true form here, and he's doing it for all the right reasons. I just hope Harry understands when it's over. I'm actually pretty shocked and saddened by this thing with Ginny. Wow. Poor Harry. He's been through so much, it's like...too much. I can't wait until he can get some relief and comfort from his man, but that won't happen until his son is back. Damn Percy! Go Sev, do your thing. Great update Emily, I'm reall fired up and rooting for this to go down in Sev's favor, and for justice to be served to those bastards who oblivated Ginny!

A sensible person, however, would leave a Pensieve memory or a written record, on some sort of time delay, so people would know where he'd gone and why if it all went wrong and he was captured. Even a letter sent to Hermione by second class (which takes three or four days) Muggle post would do it.

The plot is developing well, anyway, Severus is being his wearily competent self, Percy is also being competent, and your typing is improving. I only spotted one tiny typo - "Borgin and Bruke's".

oh dear, Ginny died, and I wonder what Severus plans, he cannot really believe that he can rescue the two children alone....if he will be captured no one will know what had happened...except Harry finds him with the tracking spells...and he promised not to do that....

The wait was well worth this chapter.
I don't even know where to begin. Your writing is impeccable, as usual. You weave the twists and turns of this story beautifully.
Great job!

I resisted reviewing up til chapter 20, just in case the story went off the rails somewhere - but no, damn it, you've managed to ratchet up the tension throughout, and keep Severus in character. And I have more than enough questions to keep me reading - did Harry Obliviate the Headmaster? Is Hagrid a Horcrux now? Will Severus break? ...I am aggravated that you've written such a compelling story, and impatient to find out where it all ends up. Gah!

Still love your story!

very very good chapter
and hope they will find them
keep going and post soon
bye bye

I never expected that. Great plot twist. But OOOHHHHH the cliffhangers.

Huh - why didn't I get my update notice?

Hmm. On the one hand Percy, as somebody who was formerly affected by Dust, may be being justifiably paranoid: perhaps he has noticed something worrying about his nephew Al, and decided to spy on him. If Percy is the kidnapper, at least Hugo should be safe.

On the other hand, Percy, as somebody vulnerable to Dust, may have been taken over by what is living in Al, and be acting as its agent, in which case Severus is inviting trouble into the house - albeit he can probably outfight Percy.

Typo, btw - you've got Olbivation where you should have Obliviation.

Wow, the last chapters are great, hope you'll update soon. I saw that another warning was added. ...Death...I just hope it will not be Severus or Harry and that they will have a Happy End together...they would deserve that after all the things they have been through..