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for Ashes of Armageddon

by emilywaters

person whitehound
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good - he's not being a martyr. He can track the cockatrice, and he knows Harry can if necessary track *him*.
person whitehound
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PS I think that's a fair assessment of Albus. He *was* fond of Severus and he *did* see him as a friend, but he saw him as a tool first. He saw everybody that way, especially Harry. And since he also saw himself as a tool first - so much so that his immediate reaction to his own impending death was "How can I use this to further the cause?" - that was fair enough.
person isadax
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You aren't going to kill severus, are you ? No, please , no no no no.....
I know i am pathetic.
person theseachange
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This does seem like the kind of thing Snape would do, especially if he felt there were practical reasons for others to stay clear of the worst of the risks. I loved Chap 62. You did a great job of showing Snape the spy being entirely convincing to Percy, gaining his trust and manipulating him, all for a completely different set of motives than Percy assumes.
person qwerty
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. Well worth the wait (even thought I was starting to think that you had dropped off the earth there for a little while!)
The way Severus can orchestra his plans is still really incredible. I wonder, will he ever get a rest chance to rest?
Keep going!
person emeraldchickpea
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Things are progressing amazingly! And such a creative way to corrupt the good and brave and kind HP - ashes of the final shattered piece of Voldermort's soul! I anxiously look forward to the progression of the story and am having trouble resisting the urge to jump ahead to the end!
person Leentjef
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
waw very very good chapter keep going and post soon
bye bye
person Anon
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay the story has gotten interseting again! (sorry but it got a bit repetitive, but it's all good now :P)

i'm really enjoying this story and i can't help but feel slightly glad that ginny's dead, stupid cow! *grrr*

aw poor Al, little psycho that he is

can't wait for an update! keep up the good work!
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dammit. I can definitely see Harry doing something like this, but I should have probably expected Severus would take on the mission by himself. It was a race to see who would get the clues together first, and not really much of one with Severus being one of the contestants. After all this time, it is a bit frustrating to read that Severus decided to do this on his own. He should have asked for someone's help, as Al might be killed in the crossfire of this rescue, making Harry's lack of being in on this plan meaningless (as Severus' justification was that Harry needed to take care of Al once this was all over). With two children at stake Severus should not be so careless as to not work with the close friends it has taken him this long to accumulate. However, for want to hope: Is Ginny the ONLY character death you meant? I mean, I do find that a bit sad, despite my dislike for her character, as it would have been nice for her to someday look less suspiciously at Harry. Wonderful job. I look forward to the next chapter.
person kunitsu
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As expected from someone like Severus but just how will he get Harry to give him those cocktrice(sp) without Harry getting suspicious. I dont know what to expect of this story anymore, such twist and turn you make are very unique