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I am so stressed! Which is what I'm sure you wanted. :-) Great chapter, when is the next? Just leave me with this horrible worry for Severus! :-)

Looking forward to the next chapter as always.

OK, I LOVE Hugo, one of the most adorable and smartest OC kids ever...and I'm so glad they got Al outta there, even though Al kinda creeps me out, he's still Harry's kid. lol Damn Sev, he almost get out OK...wringing hands...Great chapter Emily. The action is intense and I can't wait to see what happens next. You better not kill Sev or Harry::shaking fists at you:::

Very good and exciting. You'd think they'd fit lanyards on their wands so they couldn't drop the things, but it's canon that they don't. Perhaps they're afraid that if somebody used Expelliarmus it would rip their hand off.

Wow, I never realize how deep the trust from the Cockatrice was for Severus. But I suppose that only makes sense since he and Harry did rescue them.
Awesome chapter!

very very good chapter keep up th egraet work
and post sooner bye bye

The last words? That is a worrisome tittle.

Everything made sense once explained. Well OK Percy is an idiot and he does not make sense but at least we know what happend, how and why and the explaination was logical. Is it wrong that I mourn the house-elf more that Ginny?

Wonderful, and leaving me wanting more as always.

that's so sad, don't let him be killed...I hope he will survive

Well, I'm super glad he wrote that letter. Seriously. This might be an odd comment: but knowing Hermione and later Ron and Harry, they'll probably be happy to have such step-by-step instructions, if I remember the last events of Book 1 correctly. Very nostalgic parting with Harry and Severus. I really hope that the "battlefield" will not be the last time the two meet. It is nice to have Severus' thoughts on Al and the dust. Even as a reader, he holds a reassuring presence for a fictional character. Wonderful job, and I look forward to the next few chapters, peeking through my fingers, and praying things end happily. I'm not asking for a "neat tie with a bow," but happy! ...lol ^^

wonderful