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by mysticpurple

person Janeplay
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was very enjoyable. I really liked how you made Hermione talk about her husband in the third person when he was standing there in front of her all along!!! Lovely.
person Stevie
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was HOT. And very sweet, too. <33 I liked the way it was written, the mystery behind it until the end, with the surprise twist ^_^
person T.Maria
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT!!
brilliant writing and good twist!! :D
really enjoyed it!! :D
xxx
person luvhp
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ha, Knew it! Loved it!
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ha i figured out they were married ha! i loved it!
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
really cool fic. it's good to read a different dramione oneshot for a change and quite hot. nice!
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You had me goin' there! That was quite a twist. Dang. I wish I'd thought of that.

That was damn good.

You have a few little typos in there you might want to check, but other than that, kudos to you for an awesome oneshot!

TooMuch
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked this one. Would you please do a sequel?
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely perfect!! It was different from other 'Malfoy-is-in-prison-and-Hermione-is-assinged-to-him' stories and I liked the twist to it. Yaay for Benjamin Frederick, he gets gold stars from me!!! Beautifully written. You should write more.