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for Make You See My Love

by xxSnapexxWifexx

person bb761866
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a graet story. I really hope you update soon. Do you have any storys on fanfiction.net or any stories like these? =]
person 666devil
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hi,
just read the first four. you've got an interesting start to the fic. I've only read hermione going back and getting together with Snape, so this will be a bit different. Looking forward to more.
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see more of the alpha and hermione
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was great. I look forward to reading more soon. I think that Hermione will end up sharing the Shrieking Shack with Remus because he will want her to.
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is real good I hope to read more of it
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to hear about her sad tale. I am intreged
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I can't wait to read the next one.
person Utopia
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't even begin to read this, it is in desperate need of formatting! Please! Put a clear line between each new speaker and new paragraph to break up the text! One giant lump of words like this is Hell to read, and puts so many people off. I couldn't read past the first few lines before I gave up on it.

I'll have a nosey back at a later date, this intrigued me to open it, but disappointed me in it's formatting. I would like to read this, but I won't bother getting a headache trying to read it.

Please, format this properly, you'll make it more accessible to your readers if you do.
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A great chapter. I can't wait to read more soon.
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This looks to be a really fun story I will be watching for more.