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June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I continue to really enjoy this story! Keep up the good work :)
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June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeeee~! I can see this and that, and this and that from canon and I loves it! XD The only question that remains is who will Harry ask for help? Who will help him whether he wants it or not? I'm sure I'll see soon enough. ;3 *hugs Dream-sama*
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June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry it took me so long to read and review, and sorry this is so short. I'll probably come back later tomorrow or later this week to review again. I'm just too damn tired right to write that much. Details will follow later, I promise.
This was amazing. Love the scene with the spiders, and I love how they got away. I'm happy Harry found out, from Hermione (*grin*), what it is that's terrorizing the school. I'm saddened that Ginny's being driven to do all these things, including rampage through Harry and Fenrir's rooms. I hope things turn upwards for her like they did in the real HP book. I'm sad the journal's gone, but maybe Harry will tell Severus about the note from Hermione and his trashed rooms and the journal. He needs to explain it to Fenrir too, because Fenrir just thinks he had the journal because he wanted it or something, I'm sure. He doesn't understand that Harry doesn't really understand it. Anyways, great chapter. ~dpa06~
This was amazing. Love the scene with the spiders, and I love how they got away. I'm happy Harry found out, from Hermione (*grin*), what it is that's terrorizing the school. I'm saddened that Ginny's being driven to do all these things, including rampage through Harry and Fenrir's rooms. I hope things turn upwards for her like they did in the real HP book. I'm sad the journal's gone, but maybe Harry will tell Severus about the note from Hermione and his trashed rooms and the journal. He needs to explain it to Fenrir too, because Fenrir just thinks he had the journal because he wanted it or something, I'm sure. He doesn't understand that Harry doesn't really understand it. Anyways, great chapter. ~dpa06~
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June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OOOOHH! BAD GINNY! *teehee*
Now, you know how much I love you, but I've got something negative to say. (Sorry.)
It's just that, well, isn't this just a re-telling of the original story? I mean, the first "arc", if you will, when Harry and Fenrir were in the forest together, that was original. But most of the stuff that has happened in the school is just the same adventures under different circumstances, y'know? Maybe you could just kinda give a recap of sorts of what has happened that maybe you don't need to go into too much detail about, eg. the trip into the forest, and then move on to more original events. Cause you could read this story without having read the Harry Potter series and would still understand everything that's happening. But everyone reading the fic has read Harry Potter, so, I dunno, you could maybe take that into account.
But yeah. There you go. I still love the story, that's just something you could maybe try to improve.
~kati-chan
Now, you know how much I love you, but I've got something negative to say. (Sorry.)
It's just that, well, isn't this just a re-telling of the original story? I mean, the first "arc", if you will, when Harry and Fenrir were in the forest together, that was original. But most of the stuff that has happened in the school is just the same adventures under different circumstances, y'know? Maybe you could just kinda give a recap of sorts of what has happened that maybe you don't need to go into too much detail about, eg. the trip into the forest, and then move on to more original events. Cause you could read this story without having read the Harry Potter series and would still understand everything that's happening. But everyone reading the fic has read Harry Potter, so, I dunno, you could maybe take that into account.
But yeah. There you go. I still love the story, that's just something you could maybe try to improve.
~kati-chan
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June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Slight flaw in your story. How did Ginny even get IN Harry's rooms. Very few people know the password and the Weasleys aren't any of those people.
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June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*cues eerie music* And so the plot thickens!
Sweet...can't wait for the up and coming....
Sweet...can't wait for the up and coming....
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June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dum dum dum!
Nice solution to the spider dilemma. I was wondering how you were going to pull that off without the flying car coming to the rescue.
Interesting to see Draco and Ron putting up with one another for Harry's sake (even though they still make snide comments to one another...)
Great chapter! keep going!
Nice solution to the spider dilemma. I was wondering how you were going to pull that off without the flying car coming to the rescue.
Interesting to see Draco and Ron putting up with one another for Harry's sake (even though they still make snide comments to one another...)
Great chapter! keep going!
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June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes! You're horrible! I want to know what this big turn of events is. I MUST know. Tell me. Tell me now, or I will sick my Goa'ulds and Jaffas on you! They'll hurt you too, they don't like Terrans... And chocolate cake is only bested by... No. There is no besting.
As for the review - I loved this fic as well. I totally saw Fenrir being petrified. I knew it would upset Harry. But, wow, I /feel\ like I want to cry myself! I mean, at least Fenrir kinda figured it out, right before he was petrified. I want to think this is what will motivate Harry to find out what's really happening. Does Ginny still get taken? I mean, she's acting weird and all. But she doesn't have the diary. Hmmm... I'm kinda glad and kinda not glad that Harry and Sirius have made nice again. I mean, he was a right bastard. But he's there for Harry when Harry needs him most. *sigh* So complicated! I do /love\ that he went to Severus though. I saw that coming as soon as he left his rooms after the nightmare, but I'm okay with pegging that one. I like that Severus is there for Harry like that. I'm just worried about them smelling like one another when Fenrir is un-petrified. That could prove dangerous. Then again, maybe not. Fenrir's become more and more used to Severus being around and "on" Harry (his scent, I mean). I'm excited to see where this goes, as always. But remember, if it's not good, I'm sicking the Goa'uld on you. Prepare to be hosted. *grin* *evil laughter* *choke* *wheeze* ~dpa06~
As for the review - I loved this fic as well. I totally saw Fenrir being petrified. I knew it would upset Harry. But, wow, I /feel\ like I want to cry myself! I mean, at least Fenrir kinda figured it out, right before he was petrified. I want to think this is what will motivate Harry to find out what's really happening. Does Ginny still get taken? I mean, she's acting weird and all. But she doesn't have the diary. Hmmm... I'm kinda glad and kinda not glad that Harry and Sirius have made nice again. I mean, he was a right bastard. But he's there for Harry when Harry needs him most. *sigh* So complicated! I do /love\ that he went to Severus though. I saw that coming as soon as he left his rooms after the nightmare, but I'm okay with pegging that one. I like that Severus is there for Harry like that. I'm just worried about them smelling like one another when Fenrir is un-petrified. That could prove dangerous. Then again, maybe not. Fenrir's become more and more used to Severus being around and "on" Harry (his scent, I mean). I'm excited to see where this goes, as always. But remember, if it's not good, I'm sicking the Goa'uld on you. Prepare to be hosted. *grin* *evil laughter* *choke* *wheeze* ~dpa06~
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June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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At least Fenrir saw the snake's eyes through a ghost. It wasn't Nearly-Headless Nick, was it? Oh well, I suppose it doesn't really matter in the end. What matters is that Fenrir's Petrified and Harry needs to do something about it! .... With help, of course. X3 *hugs Dream-sama*
At least Fenrir saw the snake's eyes through a ghost. It wasn't Nearly-Headless Nick, was it? Oh well, I suppose it doesn't really matter in the end. What matters is that Fenrir's Petrified and Harry needs to do something about it! .... With help, of course. X3 *hugs Dream-sama*
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June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fenrir! NOO! And it was before they got the chance to make up! How convenient, Fenrir realized it was a snake and the next moment he's petrified.
Will Draco seize this opportunity to make move on Harry? I hope Draco has enough tact to understand that Harry's going through a tough time and will try to be a good friend.
Great chapter! Keep going!
Will Draco seize this opportunity to make move on Harry? I hope Draco has enough tact to understand that Harry's going through a tough time and will try to be a good friend.
Great chapter! Keep going!