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for Sacrifice

by WingsofaDream

person vaire
schedule July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved the chapter. It had never really occured to me all the issues that would arise with Harry losing his lycanthropy, in regards to how the wolf would view the situation. Poor Harry,, it would be completely shattering to be in his position. Great work, I eagerly await the next chapter :) Thanks for answering my question from last chapter.
person Juana13
schedule July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awwww poor harry!! hope his alpha doesnt shag some random wolf in the end. harry would be heartbroken!!
looking forward to the next chapter!! hope its soon ; )
person qwerty
schedule July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Fenrir can't mate with anyone else besides Harry! *pouts*
Great chapter! Keep going!
person Kuromei
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Will Sirius stop trying to come between Harry and Fenrir now? He's got to have a couple more protests in him. XP Still, I wouldn't be surprised if he doesn't, either.

Awwwww~! ^/////^ Fenrir's so cute when he's worried. Well, not "cute" cute, but you know what I mean. XP

*sings* Only five chapters left, on-ly five chapters le~~ft! XD A good thing or a bad thing, it remains to be see~~n... Be-cause all go things must end, eventually~~! XDD *dodges flying tomatoes* Yeep! See you later, Dream-sama! *runs*

person vaire
schedule July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awh that was so cute. You write tender moments so well. Im actually really sad for Fenrir and Harry, that he has lost his Lycanthropy and cant get it back. Its been such a large part of his life and its so sad to see Fenrir attempting to deal with the results of its loss like this.

Um this may have been answered already and I probably missed it, but why did Harrys eyesight not correct itself when he went through the rebirth?

Brilliant chapter. Next weekend cant come fast enough.
person Sirin Black
schedule July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loved it! this is my fav story :) can't wait to see the next chapter
person Spiros
schedule July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I feel so guilty for not reviewing last chapter... >_<

I loved this chapter! It's very adorable with Fenrir confessing his love. X3
person Anon
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Auggh! The confetti got in my eye! Lol
You have no idea how happy it made me that Fenrir still loves his little pup. And that he gave Dumbledore a peice of his mind. You had me worried but now I see that there was no reason to be. Update soon!
person dana_aeryn
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
All I have to say is yay! You know why.
person qwerty
schedule July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Go Fenrir! I'm so happy that he's still with Harry (I knew he would but still...) And he told off Dumbles! Double yes!
Great chapter! Keep going!