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by WingsofaDream

person Spiros
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh... What sweet, sweet fluff. :3
person ckhafre
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooh a severus/harry/draco illusion! Never expected that! Great chapter! I liked seeing this insecure side of Fenrir--
because up till now, I kind of thought that he wasn't insecure about much...
And you update every week- that's wonderful! It's probably a good idea not to dwell on Fenrir's age, yes-
I don't want him to get the pedo label either lol. Well, thanks for the update-
hope to read more soon! : )
person Kuromei
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, he might've had a limp, but at least Harry's in one piece. X3 Wonder how next year is going to be.... XP Anyway, as for Sirius and Remus being "together" in this fic, I don't know whether to say Fenrir's right, or if he's jumping to conclusions... Not that I'd mind if they were, heck no! X3

Yay! Two more Horcruxes down, just one more to go! XD But then, there's the final confrontation with Voldemort... But since Dumbledore's still alive, maybe Harry won't have to be the one to finish the war once and for all. *shrugs* I have no clue, so I really shouldn't be jumping to conclusions, myself. lol X3 See you next time, Dream-sama! ^w^
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You and your story here are totally and officially awesomeness!! I have seen your story since you posted it but for some reason didn't check it out until yesterday, and I have been reading it whenever I am awake! You are a totally wickedly awesome writer (your style is really good) and I love how you wrote Fenrir/Harry. Your story is one of the few I actually got into, and can't wait till next week! Have a good day!
person dana_aeryn
schedule July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Liked this chapter a lot. very interesting that Fenrir can sense horcruxes. Looking forward to next chapter and seeing them during the full moon.
person rectorlamia
schedule July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
If you write it out, I think I will actually love you forever.

o.o

Like seriously, FenrirHarry is hot enough as it is, but if you write it with him as a werewolf. I seriously think I may just randomly combust with the hotness. You'll have completely fried me.

Wow. I totally can not express how eager I am for another update. I don't think it's possible.
schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I picked up on your story finally and I must say I am impressed! It is so excellently written and all the characters are portrayed very well. I also love the plot twists and how well you have stuck with the canon despite the major changes to it! Please keep up the good work I will be anticipating your next update!
person Spiros
schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
These last two chapter's are brilliant. I feel so sorry for Harry...
person Kuromei
schedule July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another Horcrux down! XD .... How many does that leave? I've lost count. XP

Still, Harry's little plan for getting Fenrir through his heat without any "adultery" going on worries me. There's only so much a human body can take, and Harry's very human now. I can only hope that their noon-time romps won't end up hurting either of them.

See you next week, Dream-sama! ^w^ *hugs*
person ckhafre
schedule July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww that's so sad! And you're a fast updater! I didn't expect to see two new chapters when I returned!
I really hope Fenrir won't get with some random werewolf! But if he did, then maybe Harry should seek
solace in the arms of another (perhaps Draco??), and then jealousy ensues and... ok, no!
I watched HP 6 a couple of days ago and Fenrir looked exactly how I pictured him! And that miniscule
Ginny/Fenrir moment...*shivers*... ok, sorry for rambling! How old is your Fenrir by the way?
I really hope he's in his 30s and not any older! Cuz I think canon!Fenrir is probably older-
he reminds me of the local pedophile! :S