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for Sacrifice

by WingsofaDream

person qwerty
schedule August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Such a reckless plan.... I hope no one dies (I hate character death!)
Anyway, great chapter. Keep going!
person Spiros
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn... I feel sorry for Lucius. He's gonna get so much bad press... But it's hilarious. Fenrir = Awesome.
person ckhafre
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! And Fenrir in Lucius's guise... I loved it. Oh, and I was waiting for the
quill to snap (in the semi-lemon), but it didn't hehe.
Sorry- I'm in a very flippant mood today. No one's updating much these days,
so I'm really glad that you do! Hope to read more soon! : )
person Kuromei
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lmao What a way for Fenrir to have some fun! XD That was one hot little game they played while Harry was writing the letter. *fans self* And ruining Lucius Malfoy's good name like that. rofl I wonder what Draco's going to say about it. X3

Still, the time is near. The end is so close I can almost taste it. ....Wait, that's the lemon custard I just had. XP lol Anyway, see you next week, Dream-sama! ^w^
person rectorlamia
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
the first time i sat down to read this, I just got off work around one this morning. Had a glass of wine, settled down, I start reading after I lay down to bed and BAAM Fenrir impersonating Lucius and 'kissing Draco.' i could even finish, it was so ludicrous I almost died laughing. I shut my laptop, went to bed and now I've finished reading it. Awesome chapter <3
schedule August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your story is total awesomeness! You are one of the few people that actually writes a really good Fenrir! Can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fenrir what a naughty werewolf! They're almost there! I'm so excited for them! ^.^
person Sirin Black
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!..the locket secene was harsh, no wonder poor fenrir was all unnerved! You did this chapter (and all previous) really well =D
person rectorlamia
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I was a total lurker.

LOL. For some reason, while reading I thought: why should I discriminate against my friends for being black when I can hate them for stealing my slash manga and hording them until I take something of theirs for leverage.

I truly forget how racist people can be, not just in fiction, but in real life until I read about it and see it. I live in a major, diverse city so real racism doesn't occur a lot. Mostly, it's fun and games between clicks.



I totally agree though, you should have some aff.net specific stories.


Okay, and then, me and my friends Ed and Christina totally agree that you're a God/Goddess. Is that okay? Can you be our God/Goddess? You don't have to do anything but keep on writing and we will totally worship you forever.
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love how through everything Harry has seen he still manages to retain his innocence on the cruelties of the world, like the idea of racism. And the locket scene! Poor Fenrir. He loves Harry so much. And vice versa of course ^.^ Awesome update! Can't wait for more!