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for Sacrifice

by WingsofaDream

person Madhater
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yep doing a wonderful job with the story its just awesome. keep up the good work and i hope to see and update soon. ^_^
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love thos story!!! i hope he will not go to that school
person Rosei
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A fine start!!! Lots of good detail!!!
Like the way their relationship is starting out!!

Thanks,
R
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, keep it up!
person Madhater
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay an update and a wonderful one at that it was very good, i like the whole Fenrir struggle with being nice thing its kind of funny.
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do love this chapter as I did the last/first one.
Wonderfully written...and I'm hooked.
Its so smooth, flowing and captivating.
I so cant wait to read more.
I cant wait to see where this relationship will go.
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. very well written, his emotions are well thought out on your part. very good. love this chapter.
person akume
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Those few sentences were truly moving and heartfelt. Anyhow, I can't wait for the next chapter. Until next time.
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww, that was sad but I look forward to the next part, keep it up!
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! I loved it! This was perfect, and so new and fresh. I like the idea of Harry being raised as 'Pup' by this Isaac werewolf, only to be passed on to Fenrir. I like this Harry, though I haven't seen much of him. I seem to want to think that there's a fire beneath his submissive demeanor, one that Fenrir is going to find very shortly. I don't mind OCs, as long as they're not main characters. While Isaac is essential, he's not Harry or Fenrir or Dumbledore. Ya know what I'm sayin'? I'm excited for more, excited to see what Fenrir does and where they go and how he handles Harry. And, in return, I'm excited to see how Harry handles Fenrir. Fenrir and Isaac are very different, and Harry's used to Isaac. This is going to be great. And longer chapters? I'm all over that like white on rice! Keep it up! You're doing GREAT! ~dpa06~