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for Sacrifice

by WingsofaDream

person applesauce_N_soysauce
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You leave me like this....oh the angst.
Im dieing here.
The cruelness of it all, I cant bear the 2 of them apart.
Im going to start crying...if they aren't together soon.
But heres that communication thing again...damn hard headed Fenrir.
Now I have to wait till the next chapter...ugh.
Cant wait till it comes out.
person amazingZ
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
if you dislike sad endings.. i'm sure you'll stay away from them.. :3 hoping for a happy ending for this one!

anyway.. wow i really liked this chapter.. it was actually one of my favorites. i cant wait for the next one.. i want to see what happens next.

hope to see more from you soon.
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, another amazing chapter. I can't beleive everything that happened, will Fenrir appologise, will he go to find Harry,will he even remember what happened? Poor Harry, I hope Fenrir comes to save Harry from the harsh civilization that will hurt him. Please continue soon, I can't wait till the next chapter.
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Argh!! Fenrir is sooo hard headed!!! more please!! poor harry !!
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update soon thank u
person amazingZ
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwh.. i'm so in love with this story. i really love the relationship of f/h. i hope it has a happy ending.
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My reviews tend ot be long because I don't think anything is truly said when someone writes "OMG that was amazing!" or "Update soon!". I mean, I get the jist of the message, obviously, but there's nothing else there. Plus, the 'update soon' ones just annoy me. But that's not what I'm supposed to be writing about. This chapter! It was amazing, truly. I love the play of emotions going on between this pair. I mean, Fenrir is still a cold hearted bastard, as he should be. But there's something more now, because of Harry. He cares for him and protects him, but he also cares /about\ him. And poor, naive Harry. "I thought I was your wife?" I almost fell off my bed laughing! I loved that. I almost thougt Harry was going to freak a bit when Fenrir was talking about the bitch who was presenting and the mate he fought and whatever, but Harry doesn't understand any of that. And why should he? It's not like anyone's explained it. Hell, Isaac and Fenrir make Harry climb a tree for three days a year so they won't be even tempted to rut with him. Noble of them, by the way. I just love the details and all the intricacies involved in your writing. It is truly amazing, and I love it. Keep up the amazing work. ~dpa06~
person alma
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
person applesauce_N_soysauce
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad that this is continuing and I absolutely love it.
I'm always having this feeling of sadness that Dumble or Voldie is going to ruin this pair.
I just don't want it to go there...I'd be surely crushed.
Its also killing me that Fenrir is not communicating more with Harry... The boy got to know everything.
Not knowing is whats going to be the downfall for those 2...
I'm dying for those 2 step further into their relationship.

Cant wait to read more...
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Living the way harry is it's not too farfetched for hime to grow up a little faster then one would in civilized society. i loved the assumption that harry made as to being fenrir's wife... and technically it's close, he's on the right track... which is the most amusing part! Can't wait to see more!