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I am sad the farmer, the farmer's wife, and the two policemen died. I am SO happy that Fenrir went and got Harry, and that Harry didn't drown himself in the bathtub. I was so worried the policemen would use guns on Fenrir or something. And I loved the way you described Harry while Fenrir was carrying out his quadruple murder. I remember feeling like that when my sister beat up a couple of people for me. You don't really see the violence, you don't see what they're doing. You only see that they're helping you, that they've come for you, that they're doing what you can't do yourself. I think of it as a tunnel vision kinda thing. And the kiss afterwards was perfect! I am so happy that Fenrir was so caught up in the moment... Harry too, for throwing himself at Fenrir like that. I would have. I loved the sex/mating conversation. I have to keep reminding myself that Harry has no clue. And after what Isaac's told him... I wanted to laugh when I read that part. But I am glad that Fenrir was up front: they will mate eventually, after Fenrir tells him what all mating entails. And he'll let Harry kiss him again! Yeah! I loved it. OMG, you're an amazing writer. ~dpa06~

i loved this chapter, and even though the Farmer and his nice wife were killed it kinda fit the whole fic, i cant wait to the next chapter i really really like this fic.

My review shall only have one objective critique:

MOAR!!!

I love harry's child logic!! It drives fenrir crazy which is too cute!!! I can't wait for their relationship to grow!! Is the wizarding world going to show up again?!?! What about Voldemort?!? I can't wait for two weeks to be up!!!!!

You know how much I love this story when I stop reading the 4th twilight book just to check on this story! That being said AWWWWWWWWWWHOWCUTE! to fenrir who despairs that his puppy needs to be educated on the logistics of being a mate... I do however like that fenrir is gooing to one hundred per cent make sure that he is going to educate harry and make sure he knows exactly what he is going to get into but harry is most likely going to walk all over it like it really doesn't matter

I'm so glad he got away! I really like how things are slowly building. Can't wait for more!

Good chapter, but kind of sad that the Farmer and his wife had to die.

Please write more....i am loving this....i really want to know what happens

Will Harry be found out by the wizard world because of this? or will greyback find harry? or how will greyback take harry's confession?

ewe

WHAT!! NOOOOOOOOO!!! Who's the farmer? What will happen to both Harry and Fenrir? I look forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work. Love the story.

Poor Harry and Fenrir! Good chapter.