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for Sacrifice

by WingsofaDream

person Jan
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I Love it!!! I can't wait to see what's Harry reaction and his decision after hearing about his parents and Voldemort and whom he really is!

Please update chapter 8 soon ^_^

Jan
person Hajime
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooh. ....getting interesting already! ^^ great chapter dude! i simply squealed when i saw how long it was. (wiggles eyebrows) i also liked the way you made harry a beta rather than a submissive. while sub harry is fun, a change is refreshing ^^
great job luv!
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I have read quite a few fenrir/harry storiesand this one is soo different than all the others! I really enjoy it! I can't wait for more!!
person anniea
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahhh i love this story, please update soon *kisses*
person applesauce_N_soysauce
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hooray...they are together...and wow waht a kiss.
Im pleasantly happy...
What communication problems again??...nooooo!!!....oh, the trifles loved souls have to go through.
Again...cant wait to read more.
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love Fenrir/Harry stories, but unfortunately the grand majority of them involved rape and other such unpleasantness. I'm so very glad to have found your story that doesn't contain non-consent; the fact that it's well-written is just a bonus! I think you're doing a marvellous job of portraying Fenrir, his wildness and role as an alpha included. Bravo!

Smile,
Lady D
person Lina03
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what I wonderful story! I specially liked that you kept Fenrir in character and only changing him when it comes to his interactions with Harry. I have always loved stories where the big, bad, and psychotic have just the one weakness/exception to their usual ways. I can't wait for when Harry & Fenrir mate, for now Fenrir is protective and all, but once they mate I imagine his possessiveness and other werewolf instincts will become all the more earnest. Thank you for posting your work and I shall be awaiting your next update with anticipation!
person MrGalion
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dreadfully wonderful.
You are so evil to kill off four nice humans.
I await your next update and prefer the 2 week wait to a random update that could be months away.
Please work extra hard and finish the story soon so that you can update fast :).
Great work.
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy shite! No! They're separated! How long do they stay separated though? I mean, obviously they get back together, but Harry's with the farmer now. What's going to happen? And what about Fenrir? I mean, does he get out of the trap? Does he bust Harry out of the farmer's house? Does he steal Harry away? And OMG he slapped Harry! I tend to think of it as an open fist for Fenrir, because slapping just sounds so girly. And Fenrir, girly? Didn't think so. Oh man, this chapter was SO amazing! I was thinking about the plot and character development, and then I realized that this was only chapter 5!! Wow! So much in so short a time, but I feel like I'm at least 20 chapters in. It's so perfect. I don't mind the 'OMG you're hot and I'm going to screw you now' fics. But I love the drawn out ones so much more sometimes. And this is just amazing. Please, keep up the good work. And wow, this chapter. Harry's 13, he's kinda got the hots for Fenrir, and he's been 'taken prisoner' by a farmer with no Alpha for help or protection (kind of). Fenrir's an arse because he's got the hots for Harry, and now he's trapped in a bear trap without Harry. Oh, I can't wait for more! ~dpa06~
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter!

Morgana