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for Sacrifice

by WingsofaDream

person Triden
schedule September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I AM SOOOOO HOOKED! This pairing is so different from any normal pairings and I have to confess, I've been on a Sub!Harry Possessive!Voldemort kick and this pairing is so much better! I can't wait for the next chapter!
person sanda
schedule September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, sorry, I've been reading your story for a while, but I'm a bit of a lurker *is ashamed* so I haven't reviewed. But God did that chapter deserve at least a hundred reviews - haha, Fenrir is not going to hide anything, is he? Gotta love it :D Love the whole story, you write really well - I love how Harry's actually pretty IC and Fenrir is just so amazing :P
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! The chapter was wonderful and the escape from prosecution well done and unexpected. Looking forward to more.
person applesauce_N_soysauce
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter...as awlays wonderfully written and SheBang!!! - Fg/Hp finally did the naughty deed.
Love it.
I really don't like Dumble and I'm dieing to know what will happen next...Love that Fg has an answer for everything and knows what what to do towards Dumbles interference.
Got love Fg.
Cant wait to read more...and I'm glad your back.
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing. I loved it. And Fenrir is an all-or-nothing kinda guy. It's his nature, his kind for the most part. I can't see most werewolves being like Remus, honestly. And I love Fenrir the way he is. He's gruff and stern and an arsehole most of the time, but he genuinely cares about Harry and takes care of him proper. I mean, this whole chapter showed that. He said they were going to go all the way, and they did. But also, he had Harry prepare himself. That's why they hadn't gone all the way before! Fenrir's claws would have torn him apart (among other things) and they didn't have any lube. Also, he made sure Harry didn't eat meat when Harry picked some up to eat. He knew Harry didn't want to eat meat, and he didn't let him eat it and then ridicule him for it later. Then, after their bout of sex, he made sure Harry ate as well. And Harry was allowed to speak for himself. Fenrir stood up for Harry when Dumbledore said some mean things about him, and then protected him and himself when Dumbledore threatened to turn Fenrir in and take Harry away. I loved it. This whole chapter is the soft side of Fenrir, but still wrapped up in that gruff, prickly package. You're the perfect writer for something like this. Keep it up, keep going. ~dpa06~
person Jan
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gods! I could tell that I'm going to hate Dumblefuck in this story! I truly hope he doesn't try something stupid!

Please update chapter 10 soon ^_^

Jan
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so excited they got to Hogwarts. I mean, I'm more than happy for them to continue living out in the wild and whatnot where Fenrir can go about naked and they can rut whenever and wherever they want. But Hogwarts will be interesting. School, Fenrir in/near the school, the dorms. How's that going to work out? Is Harry going to be sorted and put in a dorm? And what about Fenrir? Oh, there are so many questions! I hope you update soon, because this is killing me! I just wanna know how they're going to cope. Harry's never been cooped up like Hogwarts is going to command, and Fenrir's got some bad memories apparently. Your writing is amazing. I feel as if the story were real, something I was watching from a distance rather than just reading. I love the play of emotions and how black and white it tends to be. I mean, it's just how it is with Fenrir. Excellent! Keep it up, I eagerly await more. ~dpa06~
person toads70
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woot!