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Great chapter.
I was like all...lets throw bad, smelly eggs at Dumble...
I have a bad feeling about Fenrir leaving Harry in the Castle.
I feel Dumble is going to do something bad....very bad.
And then I'll have to curse...and that is not pretty.
My cats look at me funny when I do...

As always, I cant wait to read more.

Bad or not, it seems like there are a lot of characters that I'm not going to be liking... not that I liked a lot of them to begin with *winks*

Please update chapter 11 soon ^_^

Jan

Of course he will always be Harry's Alpha, no matter how much he loves Harry or is willing to do for him, he is the Alpha male of their (albeit small) pack.

Great chapter! I loved the growth in Fenrir and Harry's relationship while still maintaining their places in that relationship. They really only have each other to trust and the deeper and more connected they are the better. The wizarding world wants Harry for all the reasons they have always wanted Harry, and they would like to get rid of Fenrir for all of the old reasons too, but now they have a new one, Fenrir's control and influence over Harry. I'm glad Fenrir decided to tell Harry about his past and that Harry accepted it. Cancer, there is no easy answer or way to deal with it, but if you find a cure, no matter how much you may disagree with it, you should just be happy for your child and not angry. (Dealing with cancer now in my own life and would probably choose the same option if made to me.)

Fenrir's and Kingsley's stand-off was pretty funny and I think Tonks' comment about men was very good. Loved the bath!

good chapter

Awww! X3
I love this! You've got such a way with words! XD
I thinks it's adorable how Fenrir is all dominant and possessive, yet loving and does what will make Harry happy at the same time! So cute!
Though I must say I was getting a bit peeved at Kingsley for being such an arse! XP
But Fen totaly told him where he could stick his veritasyrum! Well not out loud, but in my mind he was sooo thinking it! XD
And just saying, but I seriously agree with Fenrir, his parents sucked! I mean come on people! How can you dissown your own son for choosing life instead of a slow agonizing and sickly death due to cancer!?! I'd o' killed 'em too! DX
Well anyways, please! Please, keep up the amazing work; update soon. And untill then I shall remain-
Your avid reader,
Wren

Beautimus! I loved it1 I love how Fenrir's not lying about being this other person, because he is. Or rather, was. And I TOTALLY understand why he hates magic and embraces lycanthropy so much now. My friend died of cancer, so I can understand both Fenrir's side and his parents' side. Still, I could never not try to give my child more time. And Fenrir? Yeah, I'd want to be bitten too. Apparently he didn't stay long with Isaac if it was only about a month until he left to start his own pack. I'm glad that, despite the last lines of this chapter, Harry still submits to Fenrir, still looks to his Alpha for help and guidance. He asked what to do about the knocking on the door, and about the strangers with Dumbledore. I can totally understand where those last lines are coming from though, and I loved them. I love that Fenrir, bastard and beast though he still is, would go through hell and high water and Hogwarts and wizards to try and make Harry happy and safe.

One question: wouldn't Fenrir biting Harry's thumb and then licking it turn him? Werewolf saliva and all that...

~dpa06~

Hooray another chapter....well done.
I'm still shivering on the emotions that is thick in the air between Harry & Fenrir.
Specially that ending... wow.
Shiver...
Well done. There are so good for each other.
Cant wait to read more.

Wow, I really liked your history for Fenrir! It was just so believable, and I think abruptly killing his family keeps him very in character - he wouldn't be Fenrir Greyback if he just walked away from the argument and let them all live out a happy life when they'd caused him pain, right? Great chapter!

i adore this story

Oh wow that was an awsome chapter please update soon if you can e-mail me when you update.