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Excellent chapter I do believe Dumbles is up to something with Harry though. What ever could it be?

Poor Harry he is going to be so lost for these days and I bet dumbles didn't thinka bout how the moon was going to effect him...

Still loving it and looking for more!

What a wonderful Chapter! Gee I think some more of Harry's wolf instincts are coming out.

I can't wait to see what happens next!

This looks good so far. I like the twist

harry and fenrir shouldnt have to take shit from dumbledore! i hope harry escapes from the castle to be with fenrir on the full moon! go harry and fenrir! this is my favorite pairing, and my favorite story in this section.

After reading and caring for all of the things we have talked about, where the heck is the sex? It seems it is always after the fact.

good chapter

I absolutely love this story, love love love it! And I hate Dumbledore, what a cruel thing for him to do, wolves are pack animals to seperate the two of them during the full moon, (when Harry is quite vulnerable really without fenrir) is evil. Question, does Dumbledore know Harry isn't full Werewolf? And What about Harry's bad eyesight are you going to do anything about that? Also, is Harry literate? Just that he can't really be taught without being able to read. I'd also like to make a request, can we maybe have a more detailed sex (or sex-related scene) soon? Heck Dumbledore could have his timing off and be a minute or soon late at interuption and I'm pretty sure by that point Fenrir wouldn't stop nor care for the headmasters opinion. Also is snape going to be a big part of this? Anyways, can't wait for you to update again (keep the chapters long!) Thanks for a wonddeful break during midterms!

I like the way you write, and I understand it. I can see it. If I can't see a fic by the end of the first chapter (two if they're really short), then I stop reading it. I have to be able to feel the emotions and see what's going on in my head. I love the relationship between Harry and Fenrir. I can see this happening in real life - Fenrir gets Harry dumped on him, they get through hunters and seasons and heats and Death Eaters, relationship, go to Hogwarts, teachers, and now this separation. I hate this separation. I hope Harry sneaks out and goes to Fenrir. I think it's ridiculous to separate them, and Dumbledore's only doing it to piss them off. I would say run back tot he wild away from Hogwarts, but that's not possible really. With Voldemort back on the loose, they need the protection. *sigh* I hope Harry can get through these next three nights and two days. I have this feeling that Dumbledore's going to do something though, something that Harry (and Fenrir especially) is going to HATE. I'm excited for more. Keep it up. ~dpa06~

when he said "I hope he wont be too cold" I cried. fantastic!