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by WingsofaDream

schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're just terribly mean, you know that? Those two just can't catch a break. Damned Wizarding world. *sigh* I am upset with Dumbledore, but if I look at it from his point of view without knowing anything about Harry and Fenrir then I can understand it. The problem is that I do look at it from Harry and Fenrir's point of view and I do know lots about Harry and Fenrir, so I take their side and not his. Which is okay, because really? Who wants to see Dumbledore slash? Yeah. Have I scarred you for life now? LOLz! Moving on! THis was amazing. I hated 'seeing' Harry the way he was during the Full Moon. I knew it was going to affect him: being alone, not being with Fenrir, the Moon itself. I was a little amazed that you didn't put Fenrir's point of view in there, but I think it was better because it made his homecoming all the more intense. I loved that Harry tried to escape; I knew someone would stop him. There's no way Dumbledore was going to leave him unguarded. I was a little surprised that Fenrir killed all of Madame Maxim's abraxans. I loved his explanation though. "Werewolves only do two things: kill and fuck. You wouldn't let me do one, so I did the other." Good times. Oh, I would LOVE if you wrote another FG/HP fic. I'd be all over that like Fenrir on Harry! ~dpa06~
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If Dumbles keeps it up, he's going to lose Harry.
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey love the fic could you mail me updates lily_potter2023@yahoo.com
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This has to be one of the best stories on aff!! I can't remember the last time I enjoyed a story this much. :) please update soon.
schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww yes kill dumbledork off please he deserves to die seperating them like that. *die dumbles die!* (muhahahaha!)
person Elphaba
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was an awesome chapter! I love how Fen saved him!
person Elphaba
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was an awesome chapter! Loved the hot 4th moon scene!
person Elphaba
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Happy Happy Joy Joy! Great chapter! Excellent job with emotions!
person Elphaba
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sigh I love a screwed Dumble! And great First time.
person Elphaba
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was an awesome chapter. I feel sorry for Fenrir now. Sniff