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This is really good! I binged on it for two days, and when I got to the end of chapter 14 I thought my heart might break. XD When you say that Harry wants Snape's and his relationship to become "more", do you mean sexually? Because I thought I spotted some shyness on Snape's part; does he "like" Harry? :O I love how sweet Fenrir is being. I can't believe you're so well organised! I wish I was half as good as you... T_T Great stuff!

Well, I am incredibly impressed with the overall impact of this story. You've taken an AU approach with bits of canon, like a major 'what if' plotline, the characters are represented very credibly, excelent diologue and 'thought' processes, no gaping holes in the information given, and you even have minimal typos and a good grasp of diction.

I'm glad you aren't outright bashing anyone, I'm intrigued with where the story is going, and thrilled that you are chapters ahead and seemed determined to complete the story. I think thats a mistake many amateur authors make; starting a story, often a with an excellent start because they got an idea in their heads, then never finishing it because they never had an ending to begin with. If you start with an ending, all you have to do is fill in the blanks between to get the story there.

Smashing job and I look forward to the next chapter. Glad I found this fic.

yes kill him and make us happy. well i loved the chapter it was so sweet and adorable well i can't wait for the next one. don't take too long in updating it!

Was a nice chapter. I am wondering what is with Snape blushing, but not making any guesses in hope that you might surprise me. Nevertheless, I am afraid that somewhat doting, adorably submissive Harry is turning Sev on a bit too much.
I would like to see more of Draco, but leaving it completely up to you.

Ah, not even a little hint? Just a little one? Meh, why am I even bothering? You ain't gonna tell me anything. And I respect you for that. Authors who give in and tell people everything are weak. I love how you set everything up and put little details here and there that mean little at the time, but a LOT later on. Like the dancing with Draco thing. I think that'll mean something later on. I loved the idea of potions lessons. It would have brought Severus and Harry closer together, and brought Harry more into the Wizarding world. But not so much as DADA or Charms or Transfiguration. I mean, even CoMC wouldn't be as much of an intrusion in my opinion. But now? I LOVE the idea of music lessons. It just seems to hypnotize Harry, it entrances him. I love the idea of Harry being raised by werewolves and being almost half-wolf himself, learning about music from someone as "refined" and "educated" as Severus. Not being sarcastic, just stressing how self-important Severus usually makes himself out to be. I mean, he made Harry swear he'd tell Fenrir it was his (Harry's) idea and all that stuff. I'm just excited for what comes next, especially with the music and Draco. ~dpa06~

I love that Harry is going to learn to play the piano. That's wonderful! YAY! And his dancing alone and with draco was amazingly cute. Keep it up!

This chapter was splendid! It was, as always, well written and it kept my interest. You truly are a gifted woman. The relationship between Snape and Harry is one I look forward to seeing blossom and take shape. I love the way you have portrayed Severus, keeping him "real" and not OOC, but still managing to entwine him with Harry in the manner you have. I look forward o seeing how you express Fenrir's reactions to their growing relationship.

LOL! Glad to know that I could release some of my pent-up anger towards him with this story ^_^

Hey, I was wondering if Severus was starting to fall for Harry of if his affections are more fatherly like? I mean, he just keeps blushing like a toddler would with their first crush...

Please update chapter 14 soon ^_^

Jan

ummm so after dumbles learns and teaches everything can you kill him? loved the cahpter and i can't wait for more.

Beautiful chapter. I like the idea of Harry and Severus bonding, but really? At the expense of Fenrir's mind? How is Fenrir going to be on the full moon night? Hell, what's Harry going to be like? I wanna know if you're going to make Fenrir spend the night outside, or if he can stay inside with the Wolfsbane Potion. That should prove interesting. So, I don't hate you quite as much now. Making Fenrir take the Wolfsbane to force Harry and Severus to bond is acceptable, but just barely so. *grin* I can't wait for your next update. It's such a great story with an involved plot, but not too detailed. Ya know what I mean? It's just perfect! ~dpa06~