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Great chapter :P update soon!

Looking forward to the next time!

What a pity! No mpreg...! No luck! But your story is really to good to stop reading! ;)

Good chapter as always... an you end it in the crucial moment! sadist! :P

Good luck for the next chapter!
playmouse

Nothing's wrong with the chapter. Was good as always.

Yeah, my friend is really into Hermione/Severus. I can't see it. I can handle it in passing, like I said. I was reading a Harry/Remus one time. Harry was hurt, physically and mentally, so Remus ran over to Hermione and Severus' house to get Severus to use Legillimancy to see if that would help Harry. I didn't even notice anything until it said that Remus burst into their bedroom to wake Severus up. There was nothing in detail, just mentioned that they were together. That's the most I can take. And, nothing against it, but I don't do femslash in anything more detailed than the Hermione/Severus scene I described. I just can't do it.

This was an amazing chapter, I must say. I was happy that Harry didn't just latch onto Remus when he mentioned that he knew Harry's parents. I'm glad that he's confused and doesn't understand why Remus won't embrace his wolf. Even though he's not a werewolf himself, he has some traits and he lives like one. He feels more free that way; and I'm sure it was better than the Dursleys' ever was. I was upset that Dumbledore and Remus burst into their room like that. Frankly, I would have hexed them or hit them or something instantly if I were either of them. Especially Fenrir. I'm glad that Remus didn't immediately go on a crusade at Harry about how horrible Fenrir is. I'm sure he will, eventually, but I'm glad he didn't do it right away. I think he and Harry will be friends, just like he and Severus are. I'm sure Harry will win him over just like he does everyone else. I expect a little more fighting with Remus though, since Remus "knows" the kind of man Fenrir is. It's different with Harry. They're pack, they're lovers, they're... They're pack. I can't explain the bond they have. It's moer than family, it's more than friends, and it's more than lovers. They just... are. I love the way you've worked up to this so far, and I'm excited to see how far you take it. I know you've said you've got quite a bit already written. I'm excited to read it. You've got at least oen loyal fan, so keep it up. ~dpa06~

Is Remus going to become another Dumbledork? or Is he finally gonna learn how to accept his inner wolf? I sure hope is the later. Is Ron going to become Harry's true friend or just a close acquaintance?

Please update chapter 20 soon ^_^

Jan

your story is really excellent! I love it!

but you know... it would be even more excellent if you put pregnant Harry in the story! :P
Ok ok I admit I'm a mpreg fan! ^^' But really it would be a perfect story (in my point of view)...

Good luck
playmouse

PS: Sorry for write mistakes I'm French and I have many thing to learn in writing English! ^^'

good chapter! sigh i sooo want a werewolf of my own :D

How did I miss all these updates! Woo-Hoo! I Love this story. I like non-snarky Snape to Harry it is different. Loved Harry tell Fenrir he loved him!

I love Harry getting a bit more independent!