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by WingsofaDream

person Jan
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I think this is one of the only stories that I have read, that I feel completely sorry for Harry. And one of the only one that I can remember not liking any of the characters... well except Severus and Fenrir that is.

Please update chapter 22 soon ^_^

Jan
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, that was priceless! I loved all of it. And I completely understand about Sirius always being written as slightly unstable. After so many years in Azkaban, I don't blame everyone (including me) for writing him as such. I like that Harry stood up to Shaklebolt and Dumblefore. I know he still relies on Fenrir and all, and that Fenrir is trying to get him to be more independent, but it's nice to see that it's actually working. I like the balance between them: supportive and protective Fenrir, and yet Harry is still independent. I love how Remus is trying, but is still reserved. And I absolutely loved the scene in Dumbledore's office. I don't think there was a better way to write that. And Severus! Oh how I love Sev in this fic. Keep it up, you're doing marvelous.

Sev being straight, while not my wish, is understandable because I, too, would have a sudden threesome forming if he were gay. I do like the way you've written the characters. They're them, a little OOC, and still believable. I love it! ~dpa06~
schedule February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story! I would always appreciate more smex, but that's because I like dirty werewolf smex... :D Thanks!
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi!!! I'm new to your story but have enjoyed it immensely!!! I love the way you write Harry and all the others.... I hope you continue to write this story and find more ways for Fenrir to protect his Pup. Would it be a bit much to ask if Remus will accept his wolven side anytime soon? Even if Fenrir doesn't want to add to the pack it would be nice for poor Remus to have a family again... Love the story!!!
person kati
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I missed the last two updates and only noticed them now, which is great cause it means I get a little "Sacrifice" binge! Great stuff - I enjoyed it, as always. And the plot is thickening! Drama, drama, drama... Oh, but one thing I noticed that didn't really sit well with me was when you don't actually pick a word, but put down two with a forward slash in between. I don't really like that, as when you're reading the importance of connotations is great; that's what word choice is all about. So, yeah, don't like that aspect much. But loving the rest, keep up the updates!
schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay! I can't wait for the next chapter to appear! I wonder how Sirius is going to take the news of Harry and Fenrir here can't wait! Don't take too long in updating
person Kuromei
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe I dropped off the face of the internet long enough to miss two updates. O____O;; Still, now that I'm all caught up, I'd like to say that I'm glad Remus isn't going to be a bad guy. X3 That, and Fenrir's critcisms of Harry's taste in friends was funny. Especially the "what's next?" bit. XD

Anyway, there's probably something constructive or meaningful that I could say, but since I've been awake all night working (and effectively shutting down most of my brain cells out of sheer fatigue) you'll just have to do with "I love this fic more than ever and I can't wait for the next update! XD"
schedule February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know! And really, why would Snape be straight? He doesn't care about all that pureblood shite, so he's not as concerned about getting an heir. And besides, he's not very rich or anything like that. Just shag men. I seem to be doing just fine that way. *grin*

I felt inspired by my explanation of Fenrir and Harry's relationship. I love Remus though. He just seems real without seeming overly sappy over Harry being his last link to James and Lily. And Pettigrew! I knew what was going to happen the moment Ron suggested showing Scabbers to Harry. Oh that was brill! I can't wait to see what comes next!

Happy Valentine's Day! Or Singles' Awareness Day. Whichever you celebrate. Since I'm engaged, I celebrate the former. ~dpa06~
person Jan
schedule February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! They caught Peter Pettigrew! Is Sirius going to be like Remus and the rest? (That want's to take Harry away from Fenrir or turn him against him?)

Please update chapter 21 soon ^_^

Jan
person toads70
schedule February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL it wouldn't be for just..February :P loved the chapter and yay we get to see Sirius soon! i really hope Harry doesn't end up leaving Fenrir to stay in the wizarding world..that would suck!