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by WingsofaDream

schedule March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm too giddy/sleepy/flaily to make a very long, babbly AND coherent review, so I shall be brief ; I FREAKIN' LOVE THIS FIC, LIKE, SO SO SO MUCH. You are amazing and I love you to death for writing it. I am so horribly hooked on this fic now, addicted and loving it. I love how you write, your lemons are delicious, I love how you've portrayed Greyback and Harry, and the whole storyline/plot, how it follows the books, but on a totally different level & in a totally different way. I love how Dumbledore and the others seem like bad jerks who are trying to seperate Harry and Fen and make them do as they want. I totally love Harry being so faithful to his Alpha and Fen having Alphaness/affectionate/lovey/protectiveness towards Harry. And the way you've brought Ron, Draco, Sirius, Snape and Remus into it, with their different reactions and opinions and they way they think and act, different, but so awesome. I am all for Harry & Fen and them being happy werewolves and not allowing the aurors and Dumbledore to change them or control their lives. This is such an awesome fic, I love you and it! Please please continue to update.
person Elphaba
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter! Would write more internet up and down
person kati
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! Poor Sirius! I can completely understand Harry's reaction, but it seems so cruel to lovely Sirius whose had all this bad luck to get a little more doled out to him. Poor baby. *sniffle* I really liked this chapter, it had a really good pace and all the little scenes worked very well. I'm sure I've said this before, but I'm very excited to see more of Draco and his little crush on Harry!
person Rokkis
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fenrir really has a good point. And what is all this rubbish about deciding what's best for Harry. None of them knows what he's lived through. None of the others can really truly understand, and Remus is the only one he even comes close! Hope Fenrir puts Albus in his place soon 'cause frankly this is getting annoying!

Cheers!
person toads70
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter as usual! i don't think you made sirius to unstable or emotional..i mean look where he was for 12 years! i think you wrote him really well! and i'm glad to hear that harry won't leave fenrir :D
person Elphaba
schedule March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG I was rolling at the Sweeny Todd references!!
person Elphaba
schedule March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Can I say again how much I love this story! Loved Peter getting outed!
person koki
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh I love this fix buri want to read to the end until I drop
person Kuromei
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sirius. I suppose, without that little extra mental boost of busting out to find Pettigrew himself, it would figure that he'd be a little more unstable than he is in-canon. That's my story and I'm sticking to it. X3

But yay for Harry sticking up for himself! XD I can just imagine that "I told you so" look on Severus' face. *giggle* X3 See you in a fortnight! ^w^
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Why should Harry feel bad about visiting an alleged murderer proven innocent while he has no qualms about leaving with a multiple murderer like Fenrir? I prefer Fenrir's reasoning: Azkaban made Sirius volatile, of course.

Well, the meeting was really good written. It only annoyed me that Lupin slipped Fenrir's name. Fenrir is right, if Sirius wasn't informed about Harry having werewolf blood, he really shouldn