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Excellent chapter! (Trying to catch up...)

Great chapter. I'm glad that cliffhanger was resolved. And we got to see another, more tender side of Fenrir. Nice to see that he's not completely one-dimensional.
Great job! Keep going!

I actually hope that Harry never gets a working relationship with Black. He really isn't a good role model for Harry, and he wasn't in Cannon either. Despite being innocent he still spent over a decade in the prison and was not given any psychological help afterwards. Not to mention he keeps calling Harry, James in cannon. Feel free to let Harry choose Snape over sirius! Would suit the black bastard right:D

Cheers!

As much as I love this story, one thing you consistently do is driving me nuts. It's Lycanthropy. Not Lycanthopsy. No 's'. Thanks. :D

Ah, but I can't stand reading PWP, because then you don't care about Harry, the relation ship doesn't mean anything and I can't bring myself to be bothered reading them; so you stick to the good stuff, 'kay? AWESOME chapter by the way. That was totally unexpected! What has Harry done? Did he suck the Dark Mark right outta Severus's arm? I know he's gonna be okay, he's gotta be okay, he's the protaganist! (deep breaths, deep, calming breaths) Anyhoo, thank you for the Draco Development (yes, such things have titles). It was very cute. They are cute, aren't they? Little sweey boys... *sigh* but where's our big manly Fenny, eh? I miss him already... He will be sooooooo pissed when he comes back to find his mate coughing up blood. So pissed. (I am obviously looking forward to that. lol)

Great chapter!

~Kati-chan

Oh, now that's just wrong! I know it's a reaction to taking the magic of the Dark Mark into him when he... kissed? sucked? inhaled? it from Severus' arm, but now he's coughing up congealed, black blood? Wow. That IS a twist I NEVER saw coming. And do you know how hard it is for me to be surprised like that? My friends call me to tell me their big news... and I already know it because I'm expecting it happen. Wow. I'm... I'm blown away. I'm so excited to see where this goes! Sirius is a jerk, but he's not hopeless. He sees that he's hurting his godson and he feels guilty for that, but that's what he's always done so he just can't stop doing it cold turkey. It's normal for him. And after twelve years in Azkaban, he needs normalcy. Severus... I want to know what happened with Voldemort. Was he found out as a spy, or was it just a bad day for Voldemort? Fenrir needs to come back. Hogwarts is in an uproar and Harry is hurt now. Or something. Dumbledore is getting more annoying by the minute. He's using everyone, and waits until the last second to step in for whatever reason. Remus... I love him. He's a good person, trying to be human and repress his werewolf, but he still has a backbone every now and then. You've got their characters perfectly written. I almost can't wait two weeks to find out what's happening to Harry! ~dpa06~

O_________O WTF!?!?!?!? DDDX How did Harry do that? I know this is a Dream story, but you've gone and made me worry, anyway. T__T

As for the tensions between Sirius, Remus and Fenrir... They've got themselves a nice little loveless triangle, don't they? X3 Oh, wait, I forgot Severus... A loveless square, then. ^____^;; The previous is sleepy geometry, at it's best. XP

Anyhoo, I'd normally writhe and moan in cliffhanger-induced agony until the next update, but I don't think my boss would appreciate me missing work like that. X3 *hugz ya*

that chapter was so good! i love that sev doesn't have the darkmark anymore. i was wondering if fenrir bit harry, could he turn him into a complete werewolf? and sev should be one too and then they could start their own pack :D lol just an idea. i hope nothing is wrong with harry now :(

Ooh! I'm so excited to see where this ends up going! :D

That was such an evil way to end the chapter. A cliff-hanger like that and so far between updates. Im going to spend the next two weeks thinking about it non-stop when i should be doing uni work. I can't wait to see Fenrir's reaction when he gets back. Gone for three days and comes back to find harry having coughed up congealed blood. Great chapter.